Would You Care For A Jacket?

In the icy winter air

I had no one around me

All that I could do was stare

At the sapphire blue sea

 

I had no one around me

I looked down at my bare feet

At the sapphire blue sea

And still my life seemed complete

 

I looked down at my bare feet

Surrounded by the cold sand

And still my life seemed complete

Water rising up the land

 

Surrounded by the cold sand

All that I could do was stare

Water rising up the land

In the icy winter air.

Reviews

[wolfshrew]

simplicity at its best

[The Official Gary B]

This is a very good job.. Love it.. :)

[A.Lee]

Wow, good job. I like the way this is written. Nice choice of words and imagery.

[Raivenne]

Hi Anthony,

Very nice rhyming here. Thanks for joining the pantoum challenge!