"Black Banana"

"Black Banana"

A Poem by Steven

If we were two flies
I would outlive you
no matter the difficulty
so that I could eat you first

your stiff black
garbage bag body
filled with pearl white acumen
making me shiver

I would place a straw
right through your
brittle eye-basket
clown-smile and suck

but for now
I will go on eating small beings
that feast on the s**t of others
while stroking my hind legs lovingly






© 2013 Steven



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you should get this poem tattooed on your gigantic balls
that would probly hurt really bad, though

I love how you do s**t like juxtapose
'garbage bag body'
&
'filled with pearl white acumen'
it's disgusting how you fuse the disgusting
with elegant poetic language
I'm glad the lithium is working and I feel up to reading and reviewing
cause I missed reading nasty geniuses such as yourself
this s**t is rotten to the core
but I mean, green bananas, they taste creepy
too solid to be called passable texture, etc.
and the stomach ache hurts more than blue balls for christ's sake
I'm sure we've all been angry enough at someone to write a poem like this
and most of us were quite impotent in our angry expression compared to you
and for making me feel so inept, I applaud you
"if you don't write a book I'll elbow drop you in a lucid dream"
I prepped that for future quotational permission purposes

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Steven

4 Years Ago

Now THAT"S a quote to get tattooed on one's balls ;). Thanks for that, homie.
Shmoke-Sifted Heftlander

4 Years Ago

you're probly the only person I could make a review like that for, haha



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Posted 2 Years Ago


Reading this made me cringe tremendously. I hate flies! You described them so flawlessly though. Interesting, I never thought they ate other smaller flies, let alone flies of their own kind. Such gruesome cannibals. It's an interesting perspective.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Really did enjoy every bit of this, from start to finish. I could almost see you stroking your hind legs lovingly.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

My craving for a peanut butter covered banana just went

((POOF))

lol

I loved the nonsense.
I LOVED the smack in your face analogies. Brilliant!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Snarky and brilliant, oh to be a fly on the wall of this black banana, for now be content with eating other small beings....

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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There is always one person that gets the most, all of our love is reserved for them, all our hate…which never is hate, just a way for us to feel better about loving them so pathetically. The rest just keep us warm and if we are their ‘someone’ it’s a good ego boost.
123 views, 6 reviews…made me laugh, seems like your dark and twisty nature intimidates some. Haha!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Steven

4 Years Ago

True words.

Well not you ;).
whitty and dark, if I find the time I would translate to you one of the greatest poems ever written about human kind and the one-day fly by a Bulgarian writer, your words reminded me of it. Like!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Steven

4 Years Ago

Please find the time! ;) Thanks Marri
you should get this poem tattooed on your gigantic balls
that would probly hurt really bad, though

I love how you do s**t like juxtapose
'garbage bag body'
&
'filled with pearl white acumen'
it's disgusting how you fuse the disgusting
with elegant poetic language
I'm glad the lithium is working and I feel up to reading and reviewing
cause I missed reading nasty geniuses such as yourself
this s**t is rotten to the core
but I mean, green bananas, they taste creepy
too solid to be called passable texture, etc.
and the stomach ache hurts more than blue balls for christ's sake
I'm sure we've all been angry enough at someone to write a poem like this
and most of us were quite impotent in our angry expression compared to you
and for making me feel so inept, I applaud you
"if you don't write a book I'll elbow drop you in a lucid dream"
I prepped that for future quotational permission purposes

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Steven

4 Years Ago

Now THAT"S a quote to get tattooed on one's balls ;). Thanks for that, homie.
Shmoke-Sifted Heftlander

4 Years Ago

you're probly the only person I could make a review like that for, haha

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