"Part"

"Part"

A Poem by Steven


The space between your lips
tells me yes
sends me down
a lane of lime trees
flexing in the wind
reflecting sun glints
in the dew mist
of their wet flesh








© 2013 Steven


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wow, now that is a kiss...succulent...sends the speaker places...and that traveling is so tongue-licious...

nothing like a parting of lips...most passionate...being an old catholic boy...kissing was the thing..and still is.

nicely worded..love that "lane of lime trees"

can feel the pucker from the saucy lime...

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Steven

10 Years Ago

haha, thanks my man!



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Seems to turn into a romantic...
yet effective moment of bliss...
ends relatively speechless..

Posted 10 Years Ago


wow, now that is a kiss...succulent...sends the speaker places...and that traveling is so tongue-licious...

nothing like a parting of lips...most passionate...being an old catholic boy...kissing was the thing..and still is.

nicely worded..love that "lane of lime trees"

can feel the pucker from the saucy lime...

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Steven

10 Years Ago

haha, thanks my man!
those opening lines are killer - and I've read it a few times with some different interpretations... wondering if lime trees sour fruit makes that a bad yes and not a good yes that was perceived... good write


Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Steven

10 Years Ago

Hey, where the hell have YOU been?! lol, what's up?
Crystal Elisa

10 Years Ago

It's a LOOOONNNGGG story... marriage, baby, divorced, healing, growing, learning, writing.... wow th.. read more
Steven

10 Years Ago

hahaha.. well glad you're back on here.
hmmm erotic distraction, yes is very important. It is the catalyst from animate to inanimate.from the dark crevice from whichthe word no also comes from, to bright and reproductive potential

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Steven

10 Years Ago

lovely....
Bubbles, whistle blower, sunshine, beautiful goosebumps. She's America's sweetheart.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Steven

10 Years Ago

Sex. Haha..
Corset

10 Years Ago

yep, that too.
Love the soft brilliance and natural approach.. the words just melt into the imagery with such ease that it's no longer just poetry.. this is a marvelous feeling.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Steven

10 Years Ago

I like that. Thanks Circe..
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Ees
Your words fall perfectly down the page (as always) to create feeling. I love the sun glints and the trees flexing in the wind.
positively beautiful!
Wonderful job, as always.

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Steven

10 Years Ago

Thanks Ees ;)

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