lilith

proving you can't always trust

w***e of babylon, seducer of man
beguiling with your web of lies
bride of satan, destroyer of love
i journeyed with you to the bridge of sighs

purveyor of evil, messenger of fate
no man can endure your cruel, black heart
b***h of the underworld, queen of the damned
i gave you my soul and you ripped it apart

temptress of ages, tormentor of fools
deception is your killing blow
betrayer of innocence, angel of falsehood
i payed the ultimate for loving you so

mistress of mayhem, bringer of woe
man's servitude is your eternal bliss
goddess of darkness, princess of perversion
brought about my damnation with a poisonous kiss

Reviews

[KAOlmsted]

Aha! It's all your fault. (I was wondering what inspired BR to want to anally violate Lilith) :-D I'm sensing a bit of rage in this piece...just a touch. Maybe be a little less ambiguous with your feelings in future, give us a shot at figuring out what the emotional inspiration was for a piece? Thanks ;-)

[quinfinn]

go back to my much older postings, kimmer, much less ambiguous. thanks for reading me

[KAOlmsted]

I really should have a different color font for sarcasm ;-) My pleasure, quin.

[quinfinn]

sometimes i am rather thick, it is my current emotional state

[Lover Of Words]

Great job :)

[quinfinn]

thank you, Kelsey

[Lover Of Words]

My pleasure Quinfin

[Inda]

Woo! This is like a shot of tequila! Strong from start to finish. Great job, really gets in your head this one.

[quinfinn]

thank you for visiting!

[That_Girl]

I assume it's about a woman but the GIANT metaphor (alluding to addiction) is lovely. Absolutely lovely.

[quinfinn]

wow, thank you!

[Mika Haruna]

I loved this! It really shows how u can nevrr really know who someone is until its twoo latee

[Audrey Howitt]

ouch! Powerful write---and great flow