I Hate You Because I Don't Hate You At All

I Hate You Because I Don't Hate You At All

A Poem by QC
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Just a little poem I thought of. Review if it pleases you much? Thanks {:

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I hate the way you walk.

The way you talk,

The way you move.


I hate your f*****g smile.

How it makes me melt

Into a puddle of my

Own stupidity.


I hate the way your eyes are blue

And how, when you're away,

I look at the sky and think,

"Damn I really miss you right now."


I hate the way everyone loves you,

Even though nobody knows the real you

But me.


I hate how you tell me your secrets.

How you say you love me when we cuddle

On the couch.


I hate how you tell me I'm beautiful.

How you compare me to raindrops

On a tulip.

Crisp, clean beautiful.


I hate how good you are to me.

Because I don't f*****g deserve you.

Even though you say that everyone

Deserves someone.


I don't deserve anyone.


But you know what I hate the most?

How you kiss me and make me

Forget my name.


How you make me feel,

If it's only just a second,

That I am someone,

And I am worthy of love.


I hate how you make me realize

That I can't hate you.

Because you're the only person in the world

That I love.

© 2012 QC


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I know the feeling...and you said it better than I ever could. The title says it all. Fantastic.

Posted 13 Years Ago


now that is TRUE love, reading this took me back to memory lane.

keep the good writing alive

Posted 13 Years Ago


I understand that truly, and I love the feeling and the emotion, I love you, I ahte you, thats sort of linked, right? And I ahte you cause I hate you is the truth of all, love someone cause we hate someone, thats really great!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Loved this poem wow really made me wish I was with someone again that feeling of being adored but hating that your so vulnerable and mean that much to someone I really liked the structure to this poem it reads really well and shows pure emotion which I really liked Well done my favourite line is But you know what I hate the most? How you kiss me and make me
Forget my name

Posted 13 Years Ago


this was great. I can't directly relate in the sense of being loved back, but I relate to the whole hate you because I don't concept.

Posted 13 Years Ago


i enjoyed this write, so full emotion in this.

Posted 13 Years Ago


this is really good. almost like that song "hate that i love you". but great emotion comes across such simple words. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


I loved it. Nice flow. Vulgarity could go down but oh well. I can relate. (Oh and I like marshmallows too ;D )

Posted 13 Years Ago


I wrote a poem like this a long long long time ago, like during the summer. I mainly wrote those "love" poems for my friend. I could care less about those types of poems, but this is very nice, I find it interesting. Nice rhythm, keep up the great work!

Posted 13 Years Ago


To Doug O, I think the poem was great. The repetative words had rhythem. And honestly, not every poem is out there to be psycho-analyzed. This could have simply been a random product of insperation.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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