I Am

 

I am the white dove
Sent to purify tarnished souls

I am the black crow
Sent to bring a message of death

I am the wolf
Sent to walk with you in loyalty

I am the tiger
Sent to stand above with majesty

I am Destiny
Determining your path

I am Fate
Cutting your cord of life

I am
What creates your soul

I am
What destroys your soul

I Am

Reviews

[SoulofManyFaces]

I love this! The first reminds me of animal totems.
This is raw, powerful, yet there is beauty within your
words.

[StoryTailor]

You are.
I liked this. Liked the poem in general, but if you were looking for specifics, I wouldn't be able to say... I suppose that what I like is the general message. Or maybe it's the structure. Or maybe it's the comparisons. Or maybe I just like it, because I like it. Who knows? Who cares? The point is, that I liked it and I enjoyed reading it. So I thank you for a poem that is beautiful in its simplicity. And its complexity. Or maybe it's beautiful because it is both simple and complex at the same time... I'll ponder this....

[Dillon Cotter]

first off, thanks for my review =]
Now, i like the structure of this write. I can clearly see how you are a new animal representing different characteristics. Very well described with a natural good feeling!

-Will

[MoonlitAngel]

I enjoyed reading this poem. I loved how you compared animals with what they are. I didn't see anything you needed to change, or anything like that. I enjoyed very much reading this. Keep writing!

--Blood