Rain On Me

 

Rain On Me

Tonight I sit in silence

I am not skilled to understand

Why my life has hit the deep end

I don’t know what I am going to do

I am stuck and lost

Just rain on me

Wash my body to the gutter

And say goodbye to me

Tonight I look up into the dark fluffy clouds

I imagine myself up in them

A gust of wind hits my face

Tears form in my sore eyes

I fall to the ground and cover my face

It starts to pour

Just rain on me

Wash my pain away into the wind

And guild me into my path

Tonight I looked at the mountains

I know I have the strength to climb them

Because nothing is harder than living the life I live

I am going to keep climbing

Because at the top there is hope

So just rain on me

Wash my soul to peace

And watch me fly..

Reviews

[JadedSparrow]

Where have you been all my life...If I didnt know any better I would say you were reading my mind. Again I love your work. From the start I was captivated, and at the finish, I was left hungry for more. Im glad I stumbled across your poetry...

[He@ther!]

Wow!!:) I really love your imagery:) I love the idea of being cleansed by a drenching rain. A very refreshing read:)

[Pikkakard]

Wow! This is great

I like how you used the same line of 'so just rain on me' to represent sadness and then hope. Very clever.

You are a talented writer. I will definitely be reading more of your work.

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

very good, I am here , you never alone sweet poet, you look on me, and you will see the good coming soon, Yossi

[Calvspw]

I see you looking up to the clouds, and soaring amongst the sky follow the rainbow that is sure to be there, after the rain. Cleanse the soul and fly. good piece keep em coming

[Helena]

Wonderful poem....I felt the struggle within you throughout this.
From the depths of despair and looking up to the "dark fluffy clouds"
and spying that mountain that you know needs to be climbed.

I did feel the hope in this long before you stated this at the end.

And soar you will my friend, I'm sure of it.

~ Helena ~ :)