You Finally Got Me

You Finally Got Me

If you were standing in front of me

At this moment

I would tell you

You got me

You finally got me

You played me once again

Now can you let me live my life

Without this and without… You…

If I were to tell you this to your face

I would form tears in my eyes

But I would not break

I would just make you feel the pain

That I have felt the day I met you

You finally got me..

Now can you just let me live my life

Without you…

Reviews

[Adela Muresan]

This is so sweet...and reflecting an immense pain in a straingt-to way.
I like the fonts you chose and it flows well.

A.M.

[Laura E. Aranda]

The title was so misleading! wow. This was tragic and I was so expecting the opposite! Wow. Good luck in the contest. Cheers,lea

[C.J.]

it is nice and sad the picture of a lady with tears in her eyes is very eazy to see in this.

[Satine]

This is a sad write but I like its simplicity. Were it mine I think the bulk of the write is defined in this section;

"If you were standing in front of me
At this moment
I would tell you
You got me
You finally got me
You played me once again
Now can you let me live my life
Without this and without� You�

This bit tells it all, the hurt, anger etc. I think the rest of the write is perhaps un-necessary and maybe even a little too redundant. Just a thought...

Satine

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

This is really so sad it makes you want to cry. Great write though. Thank you for sharing. Debileah