I�ve Never Had

I�ve Never Had

A Poem by QuietPoet

I’ve Never Had

I’ve never had a guy

Call me and talk to me for hours

They always had something else to do

I’ve never had a guy

Make me laugh till I had tears run down my face

They always had to make someone else smile

I’ve never had a guy

Ask me how my day was

They always thought it was all about them

I’ve never had a guy

Pay for dinner or a movie

They always made me pay..

I’ve never had a guy

Look at me and actually see me

They always just saw what was on the outside

I’ve never had a guy

Pick me up when I was down

They always said they care but didn’t..

I’ve never had a guy

Say I was beautiful

They always never meant it

I’ve never had a guy

Think of me

Until I met him..

© 2008 QuietPoet


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WHen you are in love and you can translate that love through a wonderful poem like this. Readers cheer for you to never lose that love because we share in your joy as well with writes like this.

Posted 15 Years Ago


Thats so beautiful my lil friend, you beacome a real poet , you become a real women !!
Good luck in my contest , Thanks for sharing ... Hugs Yos

Posted 15 Years Ago


This is a prime example of what I've said for years, jerks keep giving those of us with the better of intentions, the hardest obstacles to have to over come just to get a fair shot with a beautiful girl. Excellent piece, you defiantly have a well formed flow and rhythm to all of your work.

Posted 15 Years Ago


wow... you dated a LOT of crappy guys (no offence) i mean i always treated my dates and made them feel like they were the only one in my life.

you portrayed a sense of pain in this that was really subtle but good none the less.

and knowing that you met someone that DOES do all that for you makes me happy!

Posted 15 Years Ago


I love this!! I was so sad for you until the very last line. Very well executed! I was about to go into a tirade about how you should hold out for him and he will come and blah, blah, blah!! Good job. You got me :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


Written very beautifully, Thank you for sharing. Debileah

Posted 15 Years Ago


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Hello, my is kylie, I havent been on here for a long time, i haven't written in years so bare with me. Reading all my old stuff brings back a lot of memories. I have a husband and twin girls, i would.. more..

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