A Romantic Night

A Romantic Night

A Poem by QuietPoet
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I felt romantic. Enjoy.

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A Romantic Night

As she walked through the door
She smelled the scent of beauty
And followed the trail of roses
She entered the room to see
The bed full of red petals
A bottle of sparkling wine in ice
And a note next to a fiery red dress
The note read to put the dress on
Come down stairs to receive a gift
As she walked down the stairs
She gave a big smile
When she saw the love of her life
Standing at the end of the steps
With the rest of the red roses in hand
He was dressed in a pressed black tux
His eyes were glowing with the sight
And his desires of loving her became real
She reached to the bottom
Standing right in front of him
Nerves running through her veins
She looked to the ground and laughed
He gently raised her chin
And gave her a passionate kiss
He tightly held her in his arms
And whispered into her sweet ears
“You’re so beautiful, I love you”
The two love birds got into the car
And the night is theirs

© 2009 QuietPoet


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With the closing line I noticed that my heart was racing, only to realize that it had been from the start. The emotion in this piece is tangible. Fantastic!!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


This was really so full of passion and raw emotions!
A great piece of writing.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Positively fantastic. beautifully done, I applaud you.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I loved it,,, sounds like a very romantic night!! I wish all men were that thoughtful lol

very sweet..

Posted 14 Years Ago


Oh my...that was beautiful. I love the description..made me feel as if I were there...

Great great job!!

Posted 15 Years Ago


Romance is a beautiful thing. We all have seen this scene but QP when you put your spin on it we not only can see it we can feel the moment. The guy with the Tux had a huge smile on his face I know! Great job and thanks for sharing. This was another side of your talent that I am know witness of. Keep me in your creative flow I love it!

Posted 15 Years Ago


WoW !!!
Really really good !!!
You must have been feeling romantic !!!
WoW !!!

What a most wonderful piece indeed !!!

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on April 23, 2009

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