Breathe Them In

Breathe Them In

A Poem by QuietPoet
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I work at this Drug addict/Suicidal rehab as a cook. Seeing them hurt the way they do, breaks my heart. A lot of them open my heart and I love to just breathe them in.

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Breathe Them In
Here I go again,
Beginning to feel
So much for people
They have just taken
A walk in my life
And dance around on 
Top of my heart
I pull them all in
I instantly care for them
They have a reason
Why they are here
Some are worse then others
But when I can put a smile
On any of their faces
It makes me whole
When I make any of the laugh
Because I do something goofy
It makes my day
When I am greeting them
And it fills them with joy
I can do it everyday
When I have a reason to be here
I will love the job even more
Because I am helping them
By making their lives easier
And if I can direct them
To have a better life
I can go home at
The end of the day
With the happiness I dream of..

© 2009 QuietPoet


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Ahh sad >.< The last part. I mean i thought you would of said something like about you been able to go home everynight. But its good. Making people that have been through such pain smile. Is such a amazing thing. Cause really all of us just need a smile. Someone to be nice and treat us like a human beings besides what many have been treated like. Nice write. And nice work.
Keep smiling and acting like a goof. You may mean a lot more to them with ur antics then you relize.

Posted 14 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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This is so heartfelt and beuatiful
I really enjoyed this wirte here
Excellent message in this.


Posted 14 Years Ago


very upbeat piece... like the message in this one....and it ended with a peaceful feeling too... overall I really enjoyed this one... thanks for sharing this...

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It is wonderful that you can bring smiles and laughter to others who are unable to generate happiness on their own. You have a gift for touching people and you are good to spread your gift wherever you find a need. It is your genuine self and no mask that creates true joy in others. Well written. Keep spreading your gift!

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I think what you are saying here is that you have a happy go lucky mask that you put on and hide behind,
But what do I know
Well done.


Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 3 people found this review constructive.

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Where you are working allows you to converse with REAL people. You are right...they ARE there for a REASON. Everyone deserves to be heard, and EVERYONE has a story to tell. No one grows up with the intention of becoming an addict or alcoholic.
This piece really shows, once again, your heart and humanity, Kylie. It is, also, another Excellent piece displaying your Wonderful Talents!

Posted 14 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Ahh sad >.< The last part. I mean i thought you would of said something like about you been able to go home everynight. But its good. Making people that have been through such pain smile. Is such a amazing thing. Cause really all of us just need a smile. Someone to be nice and treat us like a human beings besides what many have been treated like. Nice write. And nice work.
Keep smiling and acting like a goof. You may mean a lot more to them with ur antics then you relize.

Posted 14 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Ahh, what a nice-honest- piece of work.
I like hearing people write about themselves in such a straight forward kind of manner, no hidden demeanors or brick walls.
Awesome.



Posted 14 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.


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Added on July 28, 2009

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QuietPoet
QuietPoet

Las Vegas, NV



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Hello, my is kylie, I havent been on here for a long time, i haven't written in years so bare with me. Reading all my old stuff brings back a lot of memories. I have a husband and twin girls, i would.. more..

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