I Remember You (pt.2)

This is a part 2 from my other poem "I Remember You". It does hurt to see him this way..

I Remember You (pt.2)
I’ve been watching you lately
You’ve slowly become back to your normal self
Not so drugged out and out of it
Your mind has came back to earth
And your body has feeling again
I see you looking at me
I’m not sure what you are thinking
But I knew I would find out
Today you asked me what school I went to
I told you and I said I remember seeing you
You didn’t say much,
You had this “oh s**t” look on your face
Right then and there,
I knew you felt embarrassed..
You really don’t have to be
I won’t tell a soul that your in here
And I won’t think any less of you..
I know that’s what your thinking
I should have caught you from walking away
And told you not to worry about a thing
But I didn’t for some reason
Now I see you staring at me
I’m not sure why you are
If your trying to figure out
How we met or how you remember me
Or you still have that same crush on me
I really don’t think its that though
I think your heart dropped
When I told you I knew you
And you didn’t think you’d find yourself here
Staring at a person you once knew..
Believe me, I didn’t think I would either..
Not at this place anyway..
I hope you realize I do care
And I do just want to hug you
Just do your time, get better
And find your way back
To the way you use to be..

Reviews

[R J Askew]

I esp like the overall sensitivity of the poem and the first half where you are observing your subject coming down with great patience.

[Haifa]

So touching, the two parts have given me your true feelings in the 2 poems. That person he means a lot to you I guess. I hope he remembered you in later days.
Well done

[HorrorMaster]

Very good, I love this one better. Your poems make my heart beat fast.

[deeps]

I really like this and is so flowing with sincereity
This is a caring write here in which you have penned

[Sean M. Addams]

people can be a mystery sometimes but as long as the know you care ... that shows them that there is hope... but changing is up to them... nice job on this one

[Bud]

All I can say to this is--->This is one very caring and loving heart showing the world an example of what is needed to make this planet a most desirable and wonderful place to live. I can only hope that it takes heed to the lesson...
Most Excellent, Kylie!