Walking in the Sky

Love poeming i think its my absolute best love poem, it came striaght from my heart :]

You take my hand,

I'll take yours,

We will walk the the skys,

With our hands entertwined,

In the beautiful clear blue sky,

I laugh and have a good time,

You stare at me like you haven't seen me in years,

I look back,

Seeing the true you,

For the first time,

I smile at you,

You pull me close,

I feel like we are still in the air,

Everything froze in place,

So time can give us a break,

I tell you that we will never be like this again,

With my sad deep hazle eyes,

Looking deep into yours,

Too see terrible sadness that you know thats true,

My mind has one thought,

Too have more time to hold and walk with you,

You start to part,

My hand squeezes,

But knowing I need to let you go,

You...The past...Yesterday,

So slowly I let go,

Then drift down slowly down to the green open plain,

And open my eyes,

Too look at the,

Beautiful clear blue sky,

I smile,

A great big smile to know I will never let go,

Of you, the past or yesterday.

 

Author's Note

Hope you like it :D

Reviews

[Neg]

Very good, well constructed, I like it, thanks for submitting your poem.

[Bella]

It's good. It has a nice flow. :)