Sijo (It's not supposed to have a title, uh)

Sijo (It's not supposed to have a title, uh)

A Poem by Haibar Zair
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A korean format of poetry =)

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And I would light you a fire and I would show you the way
If you walk with me for a while, I will tell you stories and tales
And if you don't heed my call, I shall take my path and let you stray…
 

© 2013 Haibar Zair


Author's Note

Haibar Zair
Sijo, the older format, consists of three line with 14-16 syllables each, introduces a situation in line 1, development in line 2, and twist and conclusion in line 3.

Or something like that =)

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CLM
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The conclusion is inconclusive in that it makes the assumption of only one true path, which is always false.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Haibar Zair

10 Years Ago

Conclusion is concluding that of the only one path, the unknown, the one lost, will never be found i.. read more
CLM

10 Years Ago

exactly my point

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Added on November 2, 2013
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Tags: Sijo, Poetry, Light, Stray, Messiah, Deception

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