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Sijo (It's not supposed to have a title, uh)

Sijo (It's not supposed to have a title, uh)

A Poem by Haibar Zair

A korean format of poetry =)

And I would light you a fire and I would show you the way
If you walk with me for a while, I will tell you stories and tales
And if you don't heed my call, I shall take my path and let you stray…

© 2013 Haibar Zair

Author's Note

Haibar Zair
Sijo, the older format, consists of three line with 14-16 syllables each, introduces a situation in line 1, development in line 2, and twist and conclusion in line 3.

Or something like that =)

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The conclusion is inconclusive in that it makes the assumption of only one true path, which is always false.

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4 Years Ago

Conclusion is concluding that of the only one path, the unknown, the one lost, will never be found i.. read more

4 Years Ago

exactly my point

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Added on November 2, 2013
Last Updated on November 3, 2013
Tags: Sijo, Poetry, Light, Stray, Messiah, Deception


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