Frozen Hours

For all those lovers who are missing their love..

It's

30 days,720 hours,43200 minutes...

I don't know how I m still alive

Baby every thought of you ,

,

Makes my heart Jump

My breadth Stops

My eyes wets

& I can't control

It's horrible..

It's like i am having a volcano inside !

 I don't know how much time more 

These hours will take to melt

They are just Frozen like hell !

   

 Love? i miss u

 I miss that tight hug

 And I just wanna be in Your arm..

  

I wish I knew why this walls of hours are taking years to melt 

When I badly want them to end...

Author's Note

Please review my poem .. I need your appreciation :)

Reviews

[Arsh]

You want my appreciation? Fine.. let me take your heart away to give it a space next to my heart. And.. take my appreciation. Won't it be cool? Of course, it`d.

Well, lovers're true.. aren't they? Of course, they are, Red one. Romeo & Juliet, Jack & Jenny, Elliot & Erin, Arsh & ReD.. all are true lovers wrote the history right into the granite with the ink of their love so as .. the ancient as well as the modern productivity of heart could get to know... what kinda pleasure they all brought to hearts.

Strong piece of art.. as expect from the red one. Day~by~Day you getting in my heart. Sounds good by me... doesn't it? Of course, it does.

100/100!

[Lenah Mehzabin]

oha aaw! m I flying ? sure I'm ! ;) ... thank you so much dear .I don't know what else to say .It's a pleasure .

[Arsh]

Don't know what else to say? Okay.. got it. Just blow your love my way and always keep me "stored" into the depth of your heart. That's the only wish I wanna make come true and it can only be true if the red one comes close up and move like a barbie.

[Lenah Mehzabin]

You really are a charmer . Yes , my charming friend.. sure u r gonna stay in my heart : )

[Lupus Kaos]

I don't know how much time more
These hours will take to melt

these words reveal how this poem is not about despair I think. The hope such words make us feel is what keeps us all strong when losing someone we love. For even pain goes away, sometimes, easily or with lots of patience needed. Thank you for your words.

[Lenah Mehzabin]

yes , u are right ! I appreciate . so glad that u liked it :)

[Lupus Kaos]

I'm glad for the fact that u shared it :)

[Lenah Mehzabin]

U are welcome :-)

[vineyard]

It's evocative! Your emotions resonate with those of mine!
Beautiful!

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank you so much for your kind view.. :)

[MoriartyMesa]

Now what makes this more than remarkable, is this could be a letter, wire, note, anything to someone who never received it. One of those messages that got lost. There is more to this than meets the eye and requires one or three reads. I like it and hope more stop by and give it a read, or three...

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank you so much ..it's an honour and about the poem ,ya it's a note to someone we miss .I'm really glad that you liked it :)

[B-poet]

This poem reminds me of how deep emotional tendencies can truly become. Great work here. A nostalgic & compassionate read. :)

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank you very much .. I m really glad that You liked it :)

[Tasfia Islam]

It has a deep emotion that i succeeded to feel.....it relates a lot with me....great job... :)

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank you Annabelle ..
:) lenah

[MsJewel]

I can feel the emotion, the longing in your words. Simply beautiful!

:) Julie

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank u julie .. for feeling the real emotions i wrote.
:) Lenah