Loving You

                                      

    loving your soul

         It’s a perfumed rapture...a pleasure

           I know I touched it hard

           But it’s still a treasure

          

    Don’t know how to explain

    A eloquent possessor of charms

    Who Patently locked my unfixed... wind like heart

 

Baby I Love you to where there is no point,

I can stop.

          The want of you ...

          The tender need...

Burning me insane

I wonder if you know about the spark I feel

& that’s when I know I will love you to infinity..

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Beautiful sounds like love.


Quite stunning piece of work
nice job!



Burning me insane

I wonder if you know about the spark I feel

& that’s when I know I will love you to infinity..




Thank you for sharing this wonderful
piece and for stopping by my page.



God bless. Benita

[Lenah Mehzabin]

aww thank you so much !! ..i m glad that u liked it .. :)

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

you're welcome. :)

[Arsh]

"I wonder if you know about the spark I feel
& that’s when I know I will love you to infinity.. " very strong lines.

Well, yes, I do know how you feel .. even know very well what kinda "electrified-spark" you feel into your veins. Nice choice of words. Starting & ending both're pleasurable. Your perfume's kinda sexy-type.. isn't it? Of course, it is.

[Lenah Mehzabin]

:p Thanx babe ... ;)

[Arsh]

Always a pleasure to kiss your forehead.

[Lenah Mehzabin]

always a thank u for staying .... :-) ))

[Arsh]

Staying? But where? Oh.. you meant, staying at your heart? Sounds good.. even every intriguing. Correct me if i'm wrong, ReD one.

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Yes ! In most precious place call ''heart'' ;))

[Arsh]

Honey... be warmed, I could be very hungry so.. watch out, I can or may eat your fleshy and so juicy heart.

[Lenah Mehzabin]

:D U r really ! haha I will die in laughter now LOL !! :

[Arsh]

That's all my heart needs you to ;)

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Love u dear ,u really great !

[Lupus Kaos]

Strong and clear words, expressing for sure what you feel. I liked how it is straight to the point of being in love and has a perfect view on intense feelings.

[Lenah Mehzabin]

thanks a lot ! Ur comnt is really apprecieted bcoz u really feeled the intensity !

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem for love. I like the tone and the positive energy of the poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank you so much Coyeto ! for reading all my poems and giving so much appreciations. I'm glad ! :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Afraa]

You see love as something else, don't you?

Too beautiful for words. Well done!

[Lenah Mehzabin]

well haha i don't know what u mean by something else but ya love can make u go through every experience of life and emotions ..nd u will always want to be with the person u love according to me :)

[Tasfia Islam]

It was good.....few grammatical errs. For example, I wonder if you know about the spark thats been created inside me....instead of, I wonder if you know about the spark that creates inside me ......overall ,it was good...keep it up... :)

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank's for ur review Annabelle ... i appreciate :)

[Tasfia Islam]

my pleasure... :)