My Queen

Written for my LillyRose

My Queen of Beauty

My Angel of Light

Won't you save me from my dark and lonely nights.

My Queen of Beauty

My Angel of Love

Take me away to the heavens above.

My Queen of Beauty

My Angel so Fine

Won't you be mine

Tonight?

Reviews

[PerlySunflower]

awwwwww this is so sweet, Short but sweet and to the point.
Awesome read

[Angel's Lady]

Aw, sweet! And I assume you would be her King. Great job!

[Miss Coral]

Nice little piece- really like the rhyme scheme. You might consider some more punctuation and imagery, but awesome job otherwise. :)
-Coral-

[Dizzy]

I love the poetry of love. It's so happy and to the point.

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

This is sweet and heartwarming! As was said: Great Valentine Card!

The perfect Valentine's Day card. :) Cute.

[StormCloud]

very well written. Nice job
any girl would enjoy finding this on their email.

[A-Lovely-Anxiety]

Beautiful poem, with an awesome flow. And I love the repetition!!

[Olive Belikov]

I love the words and the flow of this poem. Totally awesome.

[Kaotic Barbie]

I think this is beautiful. What a great write.