Something Terrible

Something terrible comes this way

My dad is home drunk again

He screams and yells and makes my mom pay

My dad has been drinking again

Something terrible comes my way...

Reviews

[Cassiopia Summers]

I'm sorry Hun. I've witnessed similar, and I think you've captured the fear well. An amazing write.

[the-One-with-the-Darkne..]

Wow. Very good. im sorry uve been so hurt..

[Misty Blue Eyes]

wow horrible and apinful. but im glad you got it out on paper

[Nicaushio Espenvoll]

I hope it works out

[Hush Hush]

Short but really strong poem. Conveys the feeling of helplessness :) well done

[Kyncan]

A very sad write, RETRO. Excellent, brief and full of meaning yet sad. So many can relate to this. Wonderfully done.

[Harmony]

Short,
Simple,
and to the point.
But the meaning, the words, provides the entire picture.

[N. C. Matthews]

short, to the point, with lots of meaning and emotions; excellent work

[Rayne~Drop.]

Interesting. It's short, but it has a lot of meaning. The length of stories or poems don't really matter, in my opinion, so long as it has meaning. I like this.