Today, tomorrow and forever

Today, tomorrow and forever

A Poem by Ria Carol
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Not knowing where the time went, the poet recalls the memories of the time she spent with the love of her life.

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"Today, tomorrow and forever", said he
where the time went I will never know.
Only yesterday we were sitting on the bay,
of the great blue sea.

A promise made from the soul,
and a ring to tie the hearts.
Two hearts that came together amongst despair,
and created love.

Encapsulated in the darkness,
he lit my way.
Brighter he made it,
day by day.

Doomed to love,
I look above.
"Today, tomorrow and forever", I say
I will love you,
Till the end of my days.



© 2016 Ria Carol



Author's Note

Ria Carol
I have dedicated this to someone very special ...hopefully the person appreciates it :)
Its for the love of my life!

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That person would love it u can feel the amount of love u hav fr tht person....
Cuz hw ever far u r
My love fr u is infinity...
If it was fr me I would write this

Posted 1 Year Ago


Ria Carol

1 Year Ago

The person who this poem is meant for knows it :) Im glad you liked this poem :)
He knows I l.. read more
Very beautiful. A simply blessed little poem.

There is so much truth and reality in this poem. Finding a love, making promises in those moments of bliss, sharing hopes and dreams, binding each other together with the symbolism that the ring represents, only for time to wither away the fruits of that love, until it disappears in the wind.

A very lovely piece of writing, Ria. Longingly written and delicately crafted. Nice work.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Ria Carol

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much for your kinds words :) Im really glad that you liked it.
This message is startlingly real & poignant, pleasantly surprising for one of your age, to be stating how it might feel from a viewpoint of many years ahead. Your poetry style is very graceful & elevated, not a bit elementary, which is also a pleasant surprise. The first stanza is my favorite . . . from there, I could gather your entire scenario & meaning, which is sweet & nostalgic. I'm very impressed!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Ria Carol

1 Year Ago

Thank you very much. I'm glad you like it
Thanks for filling my heart with such happiness
Your line breaks are beautifully articulated and put together well.
Hard to believe you are only 16!
What a beautiful gift you have.

Please continue to Write and Inspire,

Mack. L

Posted 1 Year Ago


Ria Carol

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much for your sweet review. :)
A very heartfelt write. How wonderful are these promises that are for a life time.
Very beautifully expressed

Posted 1 Year Ago


Ria Carol

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much...i really appreciate your review
I'm not that great at reviewing poetry (actually, to put it quite frankly I suck at it), but I know emotional writing when I see it. You're word flowed beautifully and I loved how it didn't rhyme, but it felt like it did. It was a very likable poem!
When I read the first line I was honestly expecting a tragedy, but I'm happy to say you exceeded my initial expectations. While the piece was, in a way, sad, it was only because it expresses a sentiment that everyone can relate to; even if they've never felt it.
Job well done, and I really liked it! I'm sad I can't be of much help, but poetry isn't my forte :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Ria Carol

1 Year Ago

Not a problem...every word that you have said about my poem..helps me..and i can't express how glad .. read more
Each moment in such is a treasure and when those moments become memories they give some warmth and light to darker times...beautifully expressed :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Ria Carol

1 Year Ago

Thank you very much for your kind review.
Beautifully written. It brought me back to a memory, that will say, i go back to daily. Thanks for writing such a great piece. You are truly talented. :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Ria Carol

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much for your review

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