Blood Filled Tear

Blood Filled Tear

A Poem by Ria Carol
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Humiliation is something that everyone feels some day or the other...

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Humiliation prevails,
through the mournful prayers.
Hidden beneath the scars,
and the shame above it all.

Freezing behind the walls,
scared for the mighty fall.
An unending river of pain,
for as long as forever stays.

Meeting the break of dawn,
with a song filled with forlorn.
Masking the blood-filled tear,
leaving the world unfulfilled.

© 2016 Ria Carol



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Author's Note

Ria Carol
For all those who knows how this feels...god bless

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Geez, I have experienced so much humiliation in my life to the point that I avoid creating a reputation... However, it's inevitable. I love the dark emotions in this poem, as everyone can relate to the message. Though, I'd rather die on my feet than succumb to that self-hatred. Very nice!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Ria Carol

1 Year Ago

Thank ou for your constructive review:)
I agree about the way id die ...this poem was inspire.. read more
Sapientiam

1 Year Ago

No problem! Sorry for your loss, though...
Ria Carol

1 Year Ago

Thanks...:)
wonderful poem! and these lines, i loved them so bad, that i read them over and over again
"Freezing behind the walls,
scared for the mighty fall.
An unending river of pain,
for as long as forever stays."
superb job! keep writing :D

Posted 1 Year Ago


Ria Carol

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much
I understand this message . . . I feel humiliation comes from our ego-interpretation of how life was supposed to go. Once we get over the fact that life usually turns out quite differently than our plans, then we can move ahead from humiliation to acceptance. You have expressed the literal physical "sting" of being humiliated, using powerful metaphors to create clarity & imagery.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Many can relate to this sad and very heart felt write

Posted 1 Year Ago


This is a powerful piece.
I felt the pain throughout and was taken by the emotion that
came from these well written words, Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 1 Year Ago


but the meek shall one day inherit the earth, right?

and those who have put others down...will find their place at the bottom when all is said and done...

a very well expressed piece....we need more humility in the world, not humiliation.

j.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Ria Carol

1 Year Ago

Thank you very much for your honest words

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Ria Carol
Ria Carol

Bangalore, India



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