Paranoid

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          I've been feeling odd lately.

          Somethings just not right.

          Evreything is spinning.

           And all my enemys are winning.

           The sun dosen't look yellow, it looks like a marshmellow.

           My face looks like a proon.

           There is no moon.

 

            I hope I will be healed soon.

            

 

             Weeks later they told me I was paranoid.

        

         

          

                            

                 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Closed Account]

I'm not trying to be rude, and i hope you don't mind me saying this, but i don't really think this is good. It might just be because I'm not a fan of rhyming poetry, but I just don't know. It didn't make sense at all. Just because it rhymes doesn't mean it makes sense. I just though you might want to know.

[Tears Forgotten]

...... its good but but you can barely read it..... some ppl can't read anything with colored writing.... it is good.. good style... but the colored text is alittle too much.....