Breath

Breath

A Poem by Light




Breath~

Heaven shudders 
dim noises of wonders 
they gleam
 Finding their paths through ether 
occult splendour 
Reflected in my longing heart

I can hear the Nature's voices
moaning through ardent realm
Awaiting the rebirth 
the labour of new Creator
and I can feel His first sighs 
whispering, commanding 
each of my senses 
"Come fill my well of thirst" 
~~~
It's the rapturous Majesty 
The loving of universe 
Through You 
It's the glorious divinity 
of an adoring Deity
Drifting me through
It's simply
Your Soul's breath
Breathtaking~ 
My entity.


© GH~*
11.7.2017




© 2017 Light



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We were given from breath and we need to breathe that breath given into our spirits every moment we are alive- oh the majestic beauty and presence of the unseen spirit of the omnipotent omnipresent one who holds and keeps us from falling- wonderful🌹

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

2 Months Ago

I'm sooo glad You found my very first post on this site, Your wonderful print is a gift over this po.. read more
Rose Petal🌹

2 Months Ago

A Rose for a Rose- my pleasure🌹



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We were given from breath and we need to breathe that breath given into our spirits every moment we are alive- oh the majestic beauty and presence of the unseen spirit of the omnipotent omnipresent one who holds and keeps us from falling- wonderful🌹

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

2 Months Ago

I'm sooo glad You found my very first post on this site, Your wonderful print is a gift over this po.. read more
Rose Petal🌹

2 Months Ago

A Rose for a Rose- my pleasure🌹
Tis another wonder, she wrote...and heaven shuddered.........delicious...Neville..

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

3 Months Ago

:) thank You Neville, that's really sweet from You*
Neville Pettitt

3 Months Ago

It is merely true.......
my cup of tea...your poem takes me on a magical mystery tour of love and creation ..i love the weaving of it throughout ..i think your closing is strong and very clever ..lots of different emotions conjured for me...in nature, another person, in God, and in tht breathing ..love it!
E.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

6 Months Ago

Thank You so much my friend for Your heartfelt and understanding review, yes I was speaking of natur.. read more
Einstein Noodle

6 Months Ago

:) .........................
Beautiful faith-filled poem of joy and reverence...Rapturous image as perfect complement to the eloquent words. Words and images like jewels. Flow like divine breath. Perfection!

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

11 Months Ago

So beautiful words, beautiful, deep, understanding and wise, I so appreciate and respect Your wonder.. read more
Annette Pisano-Higley

11 Months Ago

No worries. You have already given back wit this poem. It made my day!:)
Light

11 Months Ago

Awaa thank You! 😊
The air we breathe, the hopes we hold are part of our destiny. Gallant of us to believe that the choices we make in life will enable us to hold on to hopes and dreams.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

11 Months Ago

The "Gallant" of us... how true, and how only those real strong and real courageous whom are able to.. read more
kitty

11 Months Ago

Breathe me the breath of life that I may live to honor and glorify my Creator.
Powerful and amazing poetry. I had to read again. When someone take your breathe away. You have found utopia. Outstanding poetry dear poet.
Coyote

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

11 Months Ago

With kind and beautiful reviews like Yours, I know I'm on the right path, thank You so much my dear .. read more
Coyote Poetry

11 Months Ago

You are welcome and I enjoyed your work today.
Light

11 Months Ago

Thank You, the pleasure is mine*
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Gee
Beautifully expressive writing, a poet worthy of the name

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

11 Months Ago

You are completely generous with this one sentence, Thank You so much my new friend!

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Gee

11 Months Ago

You are most welcome. Hope you have a great day, evening, night !!!
Light

11 Months Ago

3:19 pm, Happy afternoon from here, happy "all the times" to there :)
I can't think why i haven't read this beautiful poem before..
The universe is God, the creation is God and love makes it all work.
"Come fill my well of thirst" , this is almost a prayer and so beautiful i almost want to whisper the words.
In that breath you are giving your soul up and taking a journey to a higher, divine plane of worship.
Just beautiful, and i love the way you can express yourself so serenely.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

11 Months Ago

Dear Stella, Thank You so warmly much for being so kind answering my request, and also to be wonderf.. read more

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