my cup of tea...your poem takes me on a magical mystery tour of love and creation ..i love the weaving of it throughout ..i think your closing is strong and very clever ..lots of different emotions conjured for me...in nature, another person, in God, and in tht breathing ..love it!
E.
Posted 3 Months Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
3 Months Ago
Thank You so much my friend for Your heartfelt and understanding review, yes I was speaking of natur.. read moreThank You so much my friend for Your heartfelt and understanding review, yes I was speaking of nature, God... etc and how Love for another person can be raised into higher levels when it will be come "the loving of universe through You..." Thank You for visiting my fist posted poem here with Your wonderful heart, I'm so grateful 🌼🌼🌼
my cup of tea...your poem takes me on a magical mystery tour of love and creation ..i love the weaving of it throughout ..i think your closing is strong and very clever ..lots of different emotions conjured for me...in nature, another person, in God, and in tht breathing ..love it!
E.
Posted 3 Months Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
3 Months Ago
Thank You so much my friend for Your heartfelt and understanding review, yes I was speaking of natur.. read moreThank You so much my friend for Your heartfelt and understanding review, yes I was speaking of nature, God... etc and how Love for another person can be raised into higher levels when it will be come "the loving of universe through You..." Thank You for visiting my fist posted poem here with Your wonderful heart, I'm so grateful 🌼🌼🌼
Beautiful faith-filled poem of joy and reverence...Rapturous image as perfect complement to the eloquent words. Words and images like jewels. Flow like divine breath. Perfection!
So beautiful words, beautiful, deep, understanding and wise, I so appreciate and respect Your wonder.. read moreSo beautiful words, beautiful, deep, understanding and wise, I so appreciate and respect Your wonderful spirit, You grace me today with Your presence greatly, I will try my best to give it back to You my dear friend :)
8 Months Ago
No worries. You have already given back wit this poem. It made my day!:)
The air we breathe, the hopes we hold are part of our destiny. Gallant of us to believe that the choices we make in life will enable us to hold on to hopes and dreams.
Posted 8 Months Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Months Ago
The "Gallant" of us... how true, and how only those real strong and real courageous whom are able to.. read moreThe "Gallant" of us... how true, and how only those real strong and real courageous whom are able to walk the road!
You gift me a lot for one day, thank You so many bright stars 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
8 Months Ago
Breathe me the breath of life that I may live to honor and glorify my Creator.
With kind and beautiful reviews like Yours, I know I'm on the right path, thank You so much my dear .. read moreWith kind and beautiful reviews like Yours, I know I'm on the right path, thank You so much my dear friend.
I can't think why i haven't read this beautiful poem before..
The universe is God, the creation is God and love makes it all work.
"Come fill my well of thirst" , this is almost a prayer and so beautiful i almost want to whisper the words.
In that breath you are giving your soul up and taking a journey to a higher, divine plane of worship.
Just beautiful, and i love the way you can express yourself so serenely.
Posted 8 Months Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Months Ago
Dear Stella, Thank You so warmly much for being so kind answering my request, and also to be wonderf.. read moreDear Stella, Thank You so warmly much for being so kind answering my request, and also to be wonderfully generous with Your beautiful words in a review, I thought You will like this one too, I'm pleased I wasn't mistaken :)
' I can feel His first sighs ~ whispering, commanding
each of my senses ~ '
Such a personal piece of writing, a display of faith melded with a need to progress further. You use fine language, create tableaux that fill the mind as well as the eyes.
Posted 9 Months Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Months Ago
I like the way Your words spoke of my poem, thank You my friend for Your sweet words and the nice vi.. read moreI like the way Your words spoke of my poem, thank You my friend for Your sweet words and the nice visit, grateful for them all.
This does has breathtaking imagery. I love many of the phrases you used here, but above all are the last lines which kind of have stuck to me...
Beautiful piece and the pic as well.
And a beautiful review from You, thank You for Your lovely visit my friend, I'm glad You liked my po.. read moreAnd a beautiful review from You, thank You for Your lovely visit my friend, I'm glad You liked my poem and also chose the lines which are the main thing of the whole piece!
Grateful for Your nice presence, Thank You*
9 Months Ago
Of course. I think the last lines of any piece should leave an everlasting impression which is what .. read moreOf course. I think the last lines of any piece should leave an everlasting impression which is what I see here :)
You're welcome, Light. A pleasure always reading good works :)
9 Months Ago
We agree on this point :) thank You again my friend!
~.....
and know that Love
isn't in the beauty of my words
but Love is
in the thumps taking the lead
of my heart, unto Yours
that I'm not the dream
but the reality
dwells in the miracle of.. more..