Breath

Breath~

Heaven shudders 

dim noises of wonders 

they gleam

 Finding their paths through ether 

occult splendour 

Reflected in my longing heart

I can hear the Nature's voices

moaning through ardent realm

Awaiting the rebirth 

the labour of new Creator

and I can feel His first sighs 

whispering, commanding 

each of my senses 

"Come fill my well of thirst" 

~~~

It's the rapturous Majesty 

The loving of universe 

Through You 

It's the glorious divinity 

of an adoring Deity

Drifting me through

It's simply

Your Soul's breath

Breathtaking~ 

My entity.

© GH~*

11.7.2017

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

my cup of tea...your poem takes me on a magical mystery tour of love and creation ..i love the weaving of it throughout ..i think your closing is strong and very clever ..lots of different emotions conjured for me...in nature, another person, in God, and in tht breathing ..love it!
E.

[Light]

Thank You so much my friend for Your heartfelt and understanding review, yes I was speaking of nature, God... etc and how Love for another person can be raised into higher levels when it will be come "the loving of universe through You..." Thank You for visiting my fist posted poem here with Your wonderful heart, I'm so grateful 🌼🌼🌼

[Einstein Noodle]

:) .........................

[Neville Pettitt]

Tis another wonder, she wrote...and heaven shuddered.........delicious...Neville..

[Light]

:) thank You Neville, that's really sweet from You*

[Neville Pettitt]

It is merely true.......

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Beautiful faith-filled poem of joy and reverence...Rapturous image as perfect complement to the eloquent words. Words and images like jewels. Flow like divine breath. Perfection!

[Light]

So beautiful words, beautiful, deep, understanding and wise, I so appreciate and respect Your wonderful spirit, You grace me today with Your presence greatly, I will try my best to give it back to You my dear friend :)

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

No worries. You have already given back wit this poem. It made my day!:)

[Light]

Awaa thank You! 😊

[kitty]

The air we breathe, the hopes we hold are part of our destiny. Gallant of us to believe that the choices we make in life will enable us to hold on to hopes and dreams.

[Light]

The "Gallant" of us... how true, and how only those real strong and real courageous whom are able to walk the road!

You gift me a lot for one day, thank You so many bright stars 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

[kitty]

Breathe me the breath of life that I may live to honor and glorify my Creator.

[Coyote Poetry]

Powerful and amazing poetry. I had to read again. When someone take your breathe away. You have found utopia. Outstanding poetry dear poet.
Coyote

[Light]

With kind and beautiful reviews like Yours, I know I'm on the right path, thank You so much my dear friend.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome and I enjoyed your work today.

[Light]

Thank You, the pleasure is mine*

[Gee]

Beautifully expressive writing, a poet worthy of the name

[Light]

You are completely generous with this one sentence, Thank You so much my new friend!

Happy Wishes for Your Sunday***

[Gee]

You are most welcome. Hope you have a great day, evening, night !!!

[Light]

3:19 pm, Happy afternoon from here, happy "all the times" to there :)

[Stella Armour]

I can't think why i haven't read this beautiful poem before..
The universe is God, the creation is God and love makes it all work.
"Come fill my well of thirst" , this is almost a prayer and so beautiful i almost want to whisper the words.
In that breath you are giving your soul up and taking a journey to a higher, divine plane of worship.
Just beautiful, and i love the way you can express yourself so serenely.

[Light]

Dear Stella, Thank You so warmly much for being so kind answering my request, and also to be wonderfully generous with Your beautiful words in a review, I thought You will like this one too, I'm pleased I wasn't mistaken :)

Hugs and Love*

[emmajoy]

' I can feel His first sighs ~ whispering, commanding
each of my senses ~ '

Such a personal piece of writing, a display of faith melded with a need to progress further. You use fine language, create tableaux that fill the mind as well as the eyes.

[Light]

I like the way Your words spoke of my poem, thank You my friend for Your sweet words and the nice visit, grateful for them all.

Happy weekend ahead*

[Dr YumnaKay]

This does has breathtaking imagery. I love many of the phrases you used here, but above all are the last lines which kind of have stuck to me...
Beautiful piece and the pic as well.

[Light]

And a beautiful review from You, thank You for Your lovely visit my friend, I'm glad You liked my poem and also chose the lines which are the main thing of the whole piece!

Grateful for Your nice presence, Thank You*

[Dr YumnaKay]

Of course. I think the last lines of any piece should leave an everlasting impression which is what I see here :)
You're welcome, Light. A pleasure always reading good works :)

[Light]

We agree on this point :) thank You again my friend!