Breath

Breath

A Poem by Light




Breath~

Heaven shudders 
dim noises of wonders 
they gleam
 Finding their paths through ether 
occult splendour 
Reflected in my longing heart

I can hear the Nature's voices
moaning through ardent realm
Awaiting the rebirth 
the labour of new Creator
and I can feel His first sighs 
whispering, commanding 
each of my senses 
"Come fill my well of thirst" 
~~~
It's the rapturous Majesty 
The loving of universe 
Through You 
It's the glorious divinity 
of an adoring Deity
Drifting me through
It's simply
Your Soul's breath
Breathtaking~ 
My entity.


© GH~*
11.7.2017




© 2017 Light



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my cup of tea...your poem takes me on a magical mystery tour of love and creation ..i love the weaving of it throughout ..i think your closing is strong and very clever ..lots of different emotions conjured for me...in nature, another person, in God, and in tht breathing ..love it!
E.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

3 Weeks Ago

Thank You so much my friend for Your heartfelt and understanding review, yes I was speaking of natur.. read more
Einstein Noodle

3 Weeks Ago

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my cup of tea...your poem takes me on a magical mystery tour of love and creation ..i love the weaving of it throughout ..i think your closing is strong and very clever ..lots of different emotions conjured for me...in nature, another person, in God, and in tht breathing ..love it!
E.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

3 Weeks Ago

Thank You so much my friend for Your heartfelt and understanding review, yes I was speaking of natur.. read more
Einstein Noodle

3 Weeks Ago

:) .........................
Again fresh bright magic streams of your creation. I breathing with your poem and feel more happy then ever. It's art or life?

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

2 Months Ago

Can I ask for a more gratifying review than this? maybe it's not the art or life but more the rebirt.. read more
1975 MCMlXXV

2 Months Ago

I thank you too. For your always positive responses of my writing. It means lot of to me. Cause when.. read more
Beautiful faith-filled poem of joy and reverence...Rapturous image as perfect complement to the eloquent words. Words and images like jewels. Flow like divine breath. Perfection!

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

5 Months Ago

So beautiful words, beautiful, deep, understanding and wise, I so appreciate and respect Your wonder.. read more
Annette Pisano Higley

5 Months Ago

No worries. You have already given back wit this poem. It made my day!:)
Light

5 Months Ago

Awaa thank You! 😊
The air we breathe, the hopes we hold are part of our destiny. Gallant of us to believe that the choices we make in life will enable us to hold on to hopes and dreams.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

5 Months Ago

The "Gallant" of us... how true, and how only those real strong and real courageous whom are able to.. read more
kitty

5 Months Ago

Breathe me the breath of life that I may live to honor and glorify my Creator.
Powerful and amazing poetry. I had to read again. When someone take your breathe away. You have found utopia. Outstanding poetry dear poet.
Coyote

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

5 Months Ago

With kind and beautiful reviews like Yours, I know I'm on the right path, thank You so much my dear .. read more
Coyote Poetry

5 Months Ago

You are welcome and I enjoyed your work today.
Light

5 Months Ago

Thank You, the pleasure is mine*
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Gee
Beautifully expressive writing, a poet worthy of the name

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

5 Months Ago

You are completely generous with this one sentence, Thank You so much my new friend!

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Gee

5 Months Ago

You are most welcome. Hope you have a great day, evening, night !!!
Light

5 Months Ago

3:19 pm, Happy afternoon from here, happy "all the times" to there :)
I can't think why i haven't read this beautiful poem before..
The universe is God, the creation is God and love makes it all work.
"Come fill my well of thirst" , this is almost a prayer and so beautiful i almost want to whisper the words.
In that breath you are giving your soul up and taking a journey to a higher, divine plane of worship.
Just beautiful, and i love the way you can express yourself so serenely.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

5 Months Ago

Dear Stella, Thank You so warmly much for being so kind answering my request, and also to be wonderf.. read more
' I can feel His first sighs ~ whispering, commanding
each of my senses ~ '

Such a personal piece of writing, a display of faith melded with a need to progress further. You use fine language, create tableaux that fill the mind as well as the eyes.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

6 Months Ago

I like the way Your words spoke of my poem, thank You my friend for Your sweet words and the nice vi.. read more
This does has breathtaking imagery. I love many of the phrases you used here, but above all are the last lines which kind of have stuck to me...
Beautiful piece and the pic as well.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

6 Months Ago

And a beautiful review from You, thank You for Your lovely visit my friend, I'm glad You liked my po.. read more
Closed

6 Months Ago

Of course. I think the last lines of any piece should leave an everlasting impression which is what .. read more
Light

6 Months Ago

We agree on this point :) thank You again my friend!
"Finding their paths through ether
occult splendour "

Outstanding! This is my favorite lines. This is very good and a visual delight to read as well.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

6 Months Ago

Thank You so much my friend for Your lovely words, I'm pleased You liked my humble poem :)

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