Adrift~~~

Adrift~~~

A Poem by Light




~~~Adrift~~~


There is calmness in Your features
That fills my heart with comfort and peace
inside Your smile I lay my troubled heart
and within my eyes I rest Your tortured spirit
I see my face in Your sorrowful tears
and I wish to completely erase my self 
When I drown inside Your ocean eyes

Gazing to Your depth
Ready to bind me and melt me all
as You catch my softest core
The secret of my eternal existence
now between Your hands
When You gently rebirth me
making my presence totally Yours
while You make love to my Soul
And drift me away with You
to the other side.

© Gh~*

© 2017 Light



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Light
An old piece.

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I think of the sonnets of the greats when I read this...so adoring, rapturous and elegantly worded. Love, death, rebirth- all threads in the wondrous tapestry of the flowing lines. Sensuous- "You make love to my Soul"- an angel must have written this poem!

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3 Months Ago

"an angel must have written this poem", no my dear, an Angel fluttered her wings gently over my page.. read more



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Tell me which poets have here nice clear style . When you read poem loud and they sounds like a bells. Yes you are one of them. Precise and full of emotions and beauty and tender silent soul.

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2 Weeks Ago

You made my uneasy heart brights with the gentle happiness, thank You my dear friend for the most b.. read more
Hello, Light! :)
I think you're adrift in love. This is lovely writing, giving a strong sense of the warmth of emotional connection.

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1 Month Ago

Thank You Matt for the kind review.
sweet words of love,enjoyed the read

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2 Months Ago

Thank You my friend for Your kind words and visit, much appreciated.
Your own unique style comes shining through here.. beautiful, ethereal and tender :)

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2 Months Ago

Thank You so much dear Stella, You are always so kind to me, I'm pleased You've enjoyed my poem toda.. read more
Maybe old.. but timeless. It's like the web of life, death and being born again free of all unhealthy ties that keep us bound on earth.. Well written..xo

Posted 2 Months Ago


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2 Months Ago

Thank You Tracey my thoughtful friend, Your words are so beautiful, I'm pleased You found my poem th.. read more
Kind, gentle and amazing words used dear Poet. You made the emotions come alive and real. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Months Ago


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3 Months Ago

Beautiful and so generous words, thank You so warmly for Your kind presence my friend.
Coyote Poetry

3 Months Ago

Was my pleasure and you are welcome my friend.
' Ready to bind me and melt me all
as You catch my softest core '

An old piece perhaps, but exquisitely relevant whether be of another person or the Lord. Who knows, who feels, but you. Such love lingers and wraps around LIFE for the now and always. Beautiful thoughts, honey-rich verse.

Posted 3 Months Ago


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3 Months Ago

My words are stuck somewhere... so I'm posting some of my old ones, and I'm happy I did, to receive .. read more
I think of the sonnets of the greats when I read this...so adoring, rapturous and elegantly worded. Love, death, rebirth- all threads in the wondrous tapestry of the flowing lines. Sensuous- "You make love to my Soul"- an angel must have written this poem!

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This comment has been deleted by the poster.
Light

3 Months Ago

"an angel must have written this poem", no my dear, an Angel fluttered her wings gently over my page.. read more

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