Poetria's Creed

Poetria's Creed

A Poem by Light
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Behind the Words...

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Spare me
from humanity's greed
gift me 
a place closer to heaven
enraptured in the universe's arms  
saved, drifting swiftly 
My being is warm
I'm sprinkling like
the calm raindrops 

Release me from
the ground  
higher the spirit 
though, my soul is wounded
still the brightness of my heart
I will sacrifice
I have a reserve of Love
where the fountain of affections
ever pounding
so when the world falls 
I will birth my throbs
for earth, to rise again

Embrace me
my faithful entity 
and rescue me
from my raging tides 
I breathed the sigh of divinity 
from His lips, into my roots
a little He knew
a little He knows 
and now I think of me
Who am I?

I'm a thought
a thought that feels
that abounds and sings 
You don't have to like my words
or understand
and how many still are there
dreaming to print my heart 
to affect You 
to impress You
how many verses still are there 
to love You

When I'm floated away 
Read me again
and leave heavens
to shed my prayers
then, emerge me from Joy
in wondrous forms 
and know that Love
isn't in the beauty of my words
but Love is 
in the thumps taking the lead
of my heart, unto Yours
that I'm not the dream
but the reality 
dwells in the miracle of
Your breathing sound.

 © Gh~*
 19.8.2017

© 2018 Light



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Behind the words indeed. I really enjoyed the flow of this piece, which looks beyond the words and what they say about us. No matter the words, we only see an imprint of the person behind them, when they are infinitely more than the brief moments we feel your words.
I think we have grown so used to instant gratification, that it is almost impossible for anyone to have time to see what is behind the pen.
Pity really. We never learn.
Beautifully penned, thought provoking write.


Posted 1 Month Ago


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Light

1 Month Ago

Thank You Lorry for Your wonderful thoughts here, I agree with You about the instant gratification (.. read more
Lorry 4.4

1 Month Ago

My pleasure.



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There is always something more than mere words.... yes look behind them and delight in what you might find there.................beautifully crafted and thoroughly enjoyed...................Neville

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

5 Days Ago

Thank You again Neville for crossing over my page, yes what You say is true, I'm happy You've enjoye.. read more
Neville Pettitt

5 Days Ago

and the very same to you.......
Behind the words indeed. I really enjoyed the flow of this piece, which looks beyond the words and what they say about us. No matter the words, we only see an imprint of the person behind them, when they are infinitely more than the brief moments we feel your words.
I think we have grown so used to instant gratification, that it is almost impossible for anyone to have time to see what is behind the pen.
Pity really. We never learn.
Beautifully penned, thought provoking write.


Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

1 Month Ago

Thank You Lorry for Your wonderful thoughts here, I agree with You about the instant gratification (.. read more
Lorry 4.4

1 Month Ago

My pleasure.
This was a poem as a lyrical prayer, the spirit it lives. I liked it.

Posted 2 Months Ago


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Light

2 Months Ago

Thank You my friend for Your kind read and visit, I so appreciate it, glad You liked it :)
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Dear Light,
Your spiritual beauty and closeness to the Creator is reflected in each line and verse. The third verse especially speaks to the reader of the Divine oneness of the soul with the universe, with God. Truly inspirational and more.

Much Love,
Divya

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

2 Months Ago

So happy to see You again dear Divya, so, Your thoughtfulness like always, reflected though Your won.. read more
Hello, Light, thank you for entering my contest! :)
This reads like a dream. Thanks for sharing it with us.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

4 Months Ago

Thank You for reading Mat, the pleasure all mine :)
I love the flow in reading this and well as the meaning in the flow.
and know that Love
isn't in the beauty of my words
but Love is
in the thumps taking the lead
of my heart,

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

5 Months Ago

Thank You so much my friend for Your time reading my poem and Your kind words and thought, much appr.. read more
Splendidly put, words that enhance, entrance and bears such signifcance. Let your pen flow little butterfly!

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

7 Months Ago

To see You here Sweetest Kitty makes me really happy :) Your like always encouraging kind words make.. read more
Your beautiful words - so finely laid, speak so passionately and sincerely. Love cures.. love dilutes, love is home and haven.

It can be, it is..,, it is because you say so, dear Light.

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

emmajoy

7 Months Ago

Thank you... secret.. i was in quite a lot of pain at that time. not long after a big.big prob with .. read more
Light

7 Months Ago

No sorry! It's me whom is sorry for speaking too much lol, I'm here to listen anytime You need too, .. read more
emmajoy

7 Months Ago

Think i'd better do a few more reviews before the blushes rain pon me! Thank you.

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