Poetria's Creed

Poetria's Creed

A Poem by Light
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Behind the Words...

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Spare me
from humanity's greed
gift me 
a place closer to heaven
enraptured in the universe's arms  
saved, drifting swiftly 
My being is warm
I'm sprinkling like
the calm raindrops 

Release me from
the ground  
higher the spirit 
though, my soul is wounded
still the brightness of my heart
I will sacrifice
I have a reserve of Love
where the fountain of affections
ever pounding
so when the world falls 
I will birth my throbs
for earth, to rise again

Embrace me
my faithful entity 
and rescue me
from my raging tides 
I breathed the sigh of divinity 
from His lips, into my roots
a little He knew
a little He knows 
and now I think of me
Who am I?

I'm a feeling
a feeling that feels
that abounds and sings 
You don't have to like my words
or understand
and how many still are there
dreaming to print my heart 
to affect You 
to impress You
how many verses still are there 
to love You

When I'm floated away 
Read me again
and leave heavens
to shed my prayers
then, emerge me from Joy
in wondrous forms 
and know that Love
isn't in the beauty of my words
but Love is 
in the thumps taking the lead
of my heart, unto Yours
that I'm not the dream
but the reality 
dwells in the miracle of
Your breathing sound.

 © Gh~*
 19.8.2017

© 2017 Light



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Okay seriously. This is super good. Please keep it up! I am going to support you through everything! For real, I love this!

All those compliments I said were true! I mean it and I promise! You are such an amazing writer!

Have an AMAZING day!


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JordanStories

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Awww thanks! Have the best day ever! You are super sweet as well!! You're soooo awesome!!! :D For re.. read more



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I love the flow in reading this and well as the meaning in the flow.
and know that Love
isn't in the beauty of my words
but Love is
in the thumps taking the lead
of my heart,

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Light

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Thank You so much my friend for Your time reading my poem and Your kind words and thought, much appr.. read more
Nice! Cool! Good! Amazing! Unbelievable! Beautiful! Magical! Majestic! Outstanding! Astounding! Awesome! Superior! Sweet! Love it! Lit!

Okay seriously. This is super good. Please keep it up! I am going to support you through everything! For real, I love this!

All those compliments I said were true! I mean it and I promise! You are such an amazing writer!

Have an AMAZING day!


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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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JordanStories

1 Month Ago

Awww thanks! Have the best day ever! You are super sweet as well!! You're soooo awesome!!! :D For re.. read more
Splendidly put, words that enhance, entrance and bears such signifcance. Let your pen flow little butterfly!

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

2 Months Ago

To see You here Sweetest Kitty makes me really happy :) Your like always encouraging kind words make.. read more
Your beautiful words - so finely laid, speak so passionately and sincerely. Love cures.. love dilutes, love is home and haven.

It can be, it is..,, it is because you say so, dear Light.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

emmajoy

2 Months Ago

Thank you... secret.. i was in quite a lot of pain at that time. not long after a big.big prob with .. read more
Light

2 Months Ago

No sorry! It's me whom is sorry for speaking too much lol, I'm here to listen anytime You need too, .. read more
emmajoy

2 Months Ago

Think i'd better do a few more reviews before the blushes rain pon me! Thank you.
Creation like emotion ,happines. Dreámy reality gentle aproach.you show in this poem strangeness of our world.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

2 Months Ago

Thank You so much my friend for Your sweet words and kind visit, much appreciated :)
This is a hymn to love and a prayer to one person in particular but one also that all with any romance can associate with.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

2 Months Ago

I believe Your words are true, thank You for Your kind visit and thought, much appreciated.
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Beautiful prayer...
Appealing, endearing and captivating...
And this stanza
Release me from
The ground
Higher the spirit
though, my soul is wounded
still the brightness of my heart
I will sacrifice
I have a reserve of Love
Where the fountain of affections
ever pounding
So when the world falls
I will birth my throbs
for earth, to rise again

Is mind blowing.......

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

2 Months Ago

Very kind of You, I'm happy You've liked my poem, thank You so much for reading and Your sweet words.. read more
geez, Richard said exactly what i was feeling....this comes off like line spinning off a fishing reel, as if that big one were running with the bait of interpretation and the sensation of really good poetry....

wonderful writing.

j

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

2 Months Ago

Very interesting expression of enjoyment! I'm grateful for You stopping by to leave such a wonderful.. read more
The exact meaning of this poem eludes me, but the words were so crisp and beautiful that I didn't care. Very well written. This is what a poem should be.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

2 Months Ago

Truly kind of You my friend, Your sweet praise I so appreciate and so grateful for, for Your beautif.. read more
Beautiful, simply beautiful.


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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

2 Months Ago

Thank You my friend for Your short yet effective review :)
PandaPeaceful

2 Months Ago

No problem!

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