Poetria's Creed

Poetria's Creed

A Poem by Light
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Behind the Words...

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Spare me
from humanity's greed
gift me 
a place closer to heaven
enraptured in the universe's arms  
saved, drifting swiftly 
My being is warm
I'm sprinkling like
the calm raindrops 

Release me from
the ground  
higher the spirit 
though, my soul is wounded
still the brightness of my heart
I will sacrifice
I have a reserve of Love
where the fountain of affections
ever pounding
so when the world falls 
I will birth my throbs
for earth, to rise again

Embrace me
my faithful entity 
and rescue me
from my raging tides 
I breathed the sigh of divinity 
from His lips, into my roots
a little He knew
a little He knows 
and now I think of me
Who am I?

I'm a feeling
a feeling that feels
that abounds and sings 
You don't have to like my words
or understand
and how many still are there
dreaming to print my heart 
to affect You 
to impress You
how many verses still are there 
to love You

When I'm floated away 
Read me again
and leave heavens
to shed my prayers
then, emerge me from Joy
in wondrous forms 
and know that Love
isn't in the beauty of my words
but Love is 
in the thumps taking the lead
of my heart, unto Yours
that I'm not the dream
but the reality 
dwells in the miracle of
Your breathing sound.

 © Gh~*
 19.8.2017

© 2017 Light



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Okay seriously. This is super good. Please keep it up! I am going to support you through everything! For real, I love this!

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JordanStories

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Awww thanks! Have the best day ever! You are super sweet as well!! You're soooo awesome!!! :D For re.. read more



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Exceedingly professional write; passion, emotional content and entrancing verse structure; all that needs to be said is: Gratia vobis, et reverentia :-)

Posted 2 Months Ago


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Light

2 Months Ago

You are sweetly generous my friend, Thank You so very much for this Kidness.

Bless Yo.. read more
I've had to learn to disconnect from the negativity of this world and be humbled and grateful for the presence of spirit in my life. As long as I love and do good things and treat people well I'm living my life purpose ....and that is my heaven on earth. This beautiful poem reminded me of that.. thank you...xo

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Light

2 Months Ago

Your words are so very beautiful my friend, so understanding, wise and speak of a lesson we all shou.. read more
An amazing soliloquy to life and beyond life in words that flow and float like gossamer ribbons. A prayer, a plea, a song of self and muse and struggle with the pain and sadness of this world. A rose that bleeds. Magnificent poem. Brava

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Light

2 Months Ago

To take the time in Your trip to read and leave such deep and wonderful words over my humble poem, I.. read more
Annette Pisano Higley

2 Months Ago

Good morning Light, You are most welcome. It was the first time I ever voice-dictated a review! My h.. read more
Light

2 Months Ago

Awaa!! So sweet! I can feel the bless from here, wondrous times I wish for You all, Hugssss*****
Light, whenever I read a poem that tugs at my heart, I'll find myself clutching my chest while reading ... needless to say, I did just that!
This poem is so poignant in its delicate, ethereal expressions of love that I couldn't help but feel a warmth in my heart while reading. I love how virtually all the poems I've read by you illustrate the divine, spiritual quality of love while retaining a "humanness" (if that makes sense) in expression. Your last stanza was absolutely breath-taking. Great work.

- William Liston

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

2 Months Ago

Hi William :)

Yes, it makes "all" the sense, and I can understand Your words so well,.. read more
I can imagine your words echoing around the universe.
I hope they fall on gentle hearts, and that they too can feel 'your breathing sound'

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

2 Months Ago

Thank You my friend for Your very kind and sweet words, I appreciate them so much.

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Great Aunt Astri

2 Months Ago

Hope you have a good week.
A wonderful prayer. I liked the gentle flow of thoughts and hope. The words strong and worthwhile, leaving something for the reader to think about. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

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Light

2 Months Ago

Thank You for being so kind and thoughtful my friend, I'm warmly grateful.
Coyote Poetry

2 Months Ago

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.
This is a beautiful prayer to the universe, of the universe, and for the universe.
Your opening lines drew me in right away , for it is the greed of man that often spoils our natural wonder and turns brother against brother when love is all we need really to survive in body and spirit

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Light

2 Months Ago

Thank You Stella for reading my humble poem with Your gentle and caring eyes, I so appreciate it.

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