Falling Smile (a prayer)

Falling Smile (a prayer)

A Poem by Light
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Falling Smile (a prayer)

Play me once more
softly through the night 
the music of Your tears
precious and profound
to my ears whisper 
how Your Love has set the skies 
Azure, just like Your eyes

Your breath paints
unspoken words 
they drip over my window
they beat 
within my heart… 
they beat
and like the melting rain 
You and I are bonding
one drop in time
one plea tonight
together, we send above

~The prayer 
over my lips 
You become 
and I will become
over Yours
the falling smile~


© Gh~*
13.Sep.2017
9:39 PM


© 2017 Light



Author's Note

Light
a quick one, to someone so dear.

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Tender smiles in warming embrace, like gentle rain to the most parched flower, gifting it life and the reassurance of affection it needs to flourish and glow … a prayer it will always remember and carry through the most trying droughts.
From that wonderfully meaning picture to the softness of colour and words that caress deep into one's heart, you've laid open your own unto the page in such a natural and sincere way a reader is bound to fall a warm smile in gratitude and appreciation your way, too … hugs, 'n smiles to You, Dear Poetess, for sharing your sweet loveliness through the essence of your heavenly, caring prayer! ⁓ Richard ✨

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

2 Months Ago

I feel a gentle tear, tender sadness through the serene sincerity of Your words, Your essence flows .. read more
Richard

2 Months Ago

Definitely,
Raining tears of gratitude for the poetic loveliness you so generously share, .. read more
Light

2 Months Ago

No, Thank YOU RJ, GH*



Reviews

Light,
You have a vibrant imagination that dances 'n sings in every poem you pen — this one is no exeption.
Everything within this poem, from its sheer romantic allure of warmth and tenderness to its underlying sorrow, set my heart aflutter and nearly brought me to tears. I was so enraptured by every word that after reading, I felt as though I had been transported to another dimension, to heaven perhaps, like the essence of this piece was too ethereal and too perfect for this world.
GH, I thank you for the journey you've given me through your words, and for the brilliance you've let me see through your ink. You're a true gift to this site!

- William Liston

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

2 Months Ago

Awaaa!! dear William, You are truly spoiling me! I even didn't want to comment beneath Your review a.. read more
The magic of your most sincere words is so strongly felt here Little Flower. It reaches to the core of your readers and especilly to the one to whom this dedication is sincerely meant. Thank you for exposing that strongly sentimental part of you for us to share.Have a lovely week end.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

2 Months Ago

Awa dear Kitty, thank You my beautiful friend for gifting me this sincerely beautiful heartfelt revi.. read more
Tender, beautiful, melancholic , humanistic, creative, honest , love in each part. This is all I can find when I read it.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

2 Months Ago

Thank You so so very much dear thoughtful friend for such a heartfelt review, You made me happy, tha.. read more
WRITER-----------POET

2 Months Ago

You make me happy too. By this wonderful poem.
Tender smiles in warming embrace, like gentle rain to the most parched flower, gifting it life and the reassurance of affection it needs to flourish and glow … a prayer it will always remember and carry through the most trying droughts.
From that wonderfully meaning picture to the softness of colour and words that caress deep into one's heart, you've laid open your own unto the page in such a natural and sincere way a reader is bound to fall a warm smile in gratitude and appreciation your way, too … hugs, 'n smiles to You, Dear Poetess, for sharing your sweet loveliness through the essence of your heavenly, caring prayer! ⁓ Richard ✨

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

2 Months Ago

I feel a gentle tear, tender sadness through the serene sincerity of Your words, Your essence flows .. read more
Richard

2 Months Ago

Definitely,
Raining tears of gratitude for the poetic loveliness you so generously share, .. read more
Light

2 Months Ago

No, Thank YOU RJ, GH*
Amen to this exquisitely lovely prayer! "The prayer..you become and I will become."..over both pairs of lovers lips- "the falling smile"...words and images like prisms reflecting the depth of true love. Beautiful form, flow and cadence- like cascading silk...I applaud you my friend!

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

2 Months Ago

Amen dear Annette for every prayer sent above, I thank You deeply for gifting me Your most beautiful.. read more
The picture suggests thought, the looking at facts, of heart And at the initial glance.. love. Then.. then: one reads your words. Gentle and giving, they are, as if relaying dreams to Self, as if clutching precious gifts before sharing them with... whoever.

Beautiful writing.. sighhh.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

2 Months Ago

Thank You :)
emmajoy

2 Months Ago

Just found a wonderful video... do you listen to music.. ?
Light

2 Months Ago

Sure I do! will check Yours as soon as I can, thank You my friend :)

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