You~ a free verse

You~ a free verse

A Poem by Light




The hue of horizon fusion
where there is more~much
melting like serene tears 
beg my heart, call my pen
"come into the sublime realm"
where love pounds with joy
and the thumps
within my eyes inspired
carrying sensations
musical allure to my letters
ethereal sounds of
Your twinkling spirit 
dancing over the mist of 
my loving ink 
~
And like the hue of
horizon fusion 
a shade of heaven
is slowly spreading
through Your
creative presence
You rise like the twilight
dropped like
the falling flower petals
a new loving 
free verse

© Gh~*
16.Sep.2017

© 2017 Light



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' Your twinkling spirit ~ dancing over the mist of ~ my loving ink '

Such a beautiful flow of words, love, writing, a union made in heaven.. a pen dipped in the most loving honeycombed creativity .

Start to finish exquisite rippling from that calm yet inspiring picture.. Sighhhh

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

emmajoy

2 Months Ago

My absolute pleasure. Wishing you even more sunshine.. Am off and away now.. catch you soon as when.. read more
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Light

2 Months Ago

Take good care of Your lovely self dear Emma*



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And this is simply meta-poetry :D It’s impressive and so heart-warming to read your account on the muse-inspired poetry-writing process. This is something we all live as poets but, I have to confess, it is extremely curious and pleasant to read another poet’s account on it !

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

3 Weeks Ago

Ah my dear friend, we are all here to inspire and get inspired! and how lovely are Your praises and .. read more
外人 (Gaijin)

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you for gracing my day with your verses ! ^^
Light

3 Weeks Ago

Aw! my absolute pleasure!
Beautiful form with beautiful meaning. Words are like crystal in ice. Sharp and beautiful. Very clear stream inside of this poem.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

1 Month Ago

Thank You yet again for a beautiful filled with emotions review, thanking You so many many stars🌟.. read more
WRITER-----------POET

1 Month Ago

We are made of the stars , are we.
In quiet seclusion I write to 'You'. Honest, sincere, heartwarming. Thank you.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

1 Month Ago

Ah... isn't it so? thank You again for leaving me another warming words.

Great week a.. read more
' Your twinkling spirit ~ dancing over the mist of ~ my loving ink '

Such a beautiful flow of words, love, writing, a union made in heaven.. a pen dipped in the most loving honeycombed creativity .

Start to finish exquisite rippling from that calm yet inspiring picture.. Sighhhh

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

emmajoy

2 Months Ago

My absolute pleasure. Wishing you even more sunshine.. Am off and away now.. catch you soon as when.. read more
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Light

2 Months Ago

Take good care of Your lovely self dear Emma*
Oh Light now you done it made me smile with soft tears from how beautiful your love for this person and all the ways they make you feel that you can write like this, it is more sweet and warm to my heart than my simple words can ever say and what a lucky lucky the You is -- i'll say and I really like your picture to and how you put it nice and big at the top of your poem, you have a good eye for design and the red too -- thank you for the joy shared! :)

HUGGS!
Sammi

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

2 Months Ago

🌟✨🌟✨🌟✨🌟
Sammi

2 Months Ago

How very beautiful you are! ;)
Light

2 Months Ago

So are You, Lovely Sammi 🌸
What can you say when your thoughts could never compare to the beauty of this... your love. Exquisite. xo

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

2 Months Ago

Dear Tracey, thank You so much my friend for Your sincere beautiful words, deeply appreciated.
.. read more
I had read this yesterday. I read it again today and it had the same Wow affect. Wonderfully inspired poetry and beautiful turns of phrase Light.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

2 Months Ago

Hhha! Then today must be a lucky day for You :)
Tony Jordan

2 Months Ago

It is ! (hugs)
Light

2 Months Ago

Hugs*
Exquisite free-verse my friend! "The hue of horizon fusion"-stunning image. Love the cadence and trilling eloquence. The perfect similes of nature in the last verse lyrically describe the rapture of your love. Amazing poem!

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

2 Months Ago

Your reviews always so beautifully generous, just like Your dear Annette :)

Thank You.. read more

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