You~ a free verse

You~ a free verse

A Poem by Light




The hue of horizon fusion
where there is more~much
melting like serene tears 
beg my heart, call my pen
"come into the sublime realm"
where love pounds with joy
and the thumps
within my eyes inspired
carrying sensations
musical allure to my letters
ethereal sounds of
Your twinkling spirit 
dancing over the mist of 
my loving ink 
~
And like the hue of
horizon fusion 
a shade of heaven
is slowly spreading
through Your
creative presence
You rise like the twilight
dropped like
the falling flower petals
a new loving 
free verse

© Gh~*
16.Sep.2017

© 2018 Light



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Kind, wonderful and amazing use of words.
"Yourise like the twilight
dropped like
the falling flower petals
a new loving
free verse"
The above lines. I could write a epic poem from. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

2 Months Ago

The sincere thanks go to You my friend, for another kind read, another wonderful words, I warmly app.. read more



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love the format style and content. free verse allows for such an open display of meaning and emotion. It is not utilized enough. I really enjoyed this. Thanks for posting

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

2 Weeks Ago

I agree with You my friend, it allows free creativity, I'm pleased that You've enjoyed my poem here,.. read more
I love the way you paid so much attention to the tone of each word
flowing like a beautiful moment in time

i am your new fan
bravo !!

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

3 Weeks Ago

how lovely and beautiful to hear these words my friend, You are very kind.

I'm really.. read more
Beautiful writing, one of your best methinks :)

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

1 Month Ago

Thank You Stella! and I also think it's one of my best, it's also so special to me, I'm happy we thi.. read more
Kind, wonderful and amazing use of words.
"Yourise like the twilight
dropped like
the falling flower petals
a new loving
free verse"
The above lines. I could write a epic poem from. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

2 Months Ago

The sincere thanks go to You my friend, for another kind read, another wonderful words, I warmly app.. read more
And on and on it will flow in the form of the most amazing flowing dance - emitting words and pictures only seen by the imagination within the soul- wonderful like always🌹

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

2 Months Ago

Oh my sweet friend! Thank You for reading again my words with Your lovely heart, for Your lovely tou.. read more
Thoughts In Time

2 Months Ago

Much love and blessings 🦋🌈🌹
I think this is my favouwrite of yours to date and there are certainly several bits I would be very proud of if I had written them......N

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

2 Months Ago

This also one of my favorites, so we agree on something here :)

Thank You again for .. read more
Neville Pettitt

2 Months Ago

We do indeed and the pleasure is entirely mine...
your phrases flow beautifully.
"a shade of heaven
is slowly spreading
through Your
creative presence
You rise like the twilight
dropped like
the falling flower petals"
These lines especially gave me the feeling I hope you were aiming for. A peaceful restlessness if that makes sense.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

5 Months Ago

Hi my friend :)

Thank You so much for visiting my page with Your lovely words, I thi.. read more
And this is simply meta-poetry :D It’s impressive and so heart-warming to read your account on the muse-inspired poetry-writing process. This is something we all live as poets but, I have to confess, it is extremely curious and pleasant to read another poet’s account on it !

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

6 Months Ago

Ah my dear friend, we are all here to inspire and get inspired! and how lovely are Your praises and .. read more
外人 (Gaijin)

6 Months Ago

Thank you for gracing my day with your verses ! ^^
Light

6 Months Ago

Aw! my absolute pleasure!

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Added on September 16, 2017
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Tags: Writing, Personal, Poetry, Spiritual, Creative, Love

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