Ingénue

Ingénue

A Poem by Light
"

but I can’t seem to forget, when you came along... Ingenue...

"




~Ingénue~


 

Thy sky breaks,

over the yonder dream

of Thy lips touching mine,

through Thin lips

tasting mine soul.

 

Between the falling tears,

and the floating golden leaves

mine heart shatters'

trusted beats;

tearing into fading shimmers.

 

Dripping soul

in to the azure oceans,

of a lonesome spirit

has lived enough to die,

within his ancient eyes

drip me with my love,

passing away,

to mine Thy sky. 




©  Gh ~*

24.Sep.2015.

 



© 2018 Light



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I dont know how I managed to miss this until just now.. I'm sure I've scoured your pages here, time and time again.. aah.. I get it.. must be a new version of a golden oldie... you certainly have a rare talent my friend for choosing words and crafting the most beautiful poetry from them.... now write some more Neville x

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

3 Weeks Ago

Thank You, SO very MUCH for Your sweetest kindness here dear Neville, it means a lot and does warm m.. read more
Neville Pettitt

3 Weeks Ago

I am very pleased, tis always good hear such things, Neville x



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I dont know how I managed to miss this until just now.. I'm sure I've scoured your pages here, time and time again.. aah.. I get it.. must be a new version of a golden oldie... you certainly have a rare talent my friend for choosing words and crafting the most beautiful poetry from them.... now write some more Neville x

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

3 Weeks Ago

Thank You, SO very MUCH for Your sweetest kindness here dear Neville, it means a lot and does warm m.. read more
Neville Pettitt

3 Weeks Ago

I am very pleased, tis always good hear such things, Neville x
Yes in your writing is echo of old times. Like in the dust of age you find and re print again from your creative mind. Emotions are real like sun on the sky.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

1 Year Ago

Very very beautiful brilliant of words~ I love it, and I love that You felt it through my pen~ thank.. read more
Tropique de carcasse

1 Year Ago

All right i will try my best. Have nice Monday .
The first verse is a gentle burst of light upon a yearning soul. The second verse brings sorrow amidst golden enchantment. The concuding verse embodies the truth and wisdom of life and love. Your pen drips beauty even when denoting adversity and that is such a special gift. The poem is visually a treat to read as well. Thank you for a completely beautiful reading experience here, dear Light.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

1 Year Ago

Thank You Divya dear for such a caring and thoughtful read, the praises You gifted me are as sweet .. read more
My eyes are dazzled by your golden image and poem my friend. Such luminous words and emotions expressed here. “Tasting mine soul”- elegantly sensuous, innocent, rapturous poem. Tears distilled into drops of sadness at the end...Brilliant!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

1 Year Ago

You make receiving reviews a true joy, thank You deeply dear Annette.
Tender innocence so perfectly exemplifies the sweet gentleness of this wonderfully laid and expressed work of enchantingly captivating – though, beautifully poignant, Free Verse, as only You can.
Enticed: A smile, a soft embrace, a wispy, deep tug upon the core by a touch of the sweetest Ingénue (an innocent young woman), to make an olde bard's poetic heart flutter from sheer emotion of the moment!

Warmest hug of thanks to you for bringing such forth from my depths … simply another enthralling virtual masterpiece from your creative ink, GH, and the picture and music … بالرحمة والمحبة الع�™ي�™ة ⁓ Richard : )

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard

1 Year Ago

I try my best, Dear Lady. ; )
Richard

1 Year Ago

With Google Translation, of course … LOL!
Light

1 Year Ago

I know, still... ;)
Ingénue I had to look it up in the dictionary and it gives your heart touching poem a completely clearer deeper and different meaning -- I am not going to keep on and on this time because I'm simply too stunned by your beautiful soul dear Light -- love to you! :)

HUGGS!
Sammi

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

1 Year Ago

I only know few French words lol, I thought the title would be more beautiful in French and it was a.. read more
Sammi

1 Year Ago

I'll be waiting and looking forward to it dear Light. :)

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