Love in Mono

Love in Mono

A Poem by Light




Tell me,
why I'm jealous 
of papers and pen,
the fading drops of rain 
joyously enjoying
a moment of warmth 
over the lustful leafs,
before they fall
drenching my ground 
with sad rhythms
of my pulsing heart 
being crushed away
by the cruel winds.

Of words that make 
a half of me,
I've written You the years,
filled Your palms with 
promised eternity,
and brought the Sun
down to Your feet,
to rise, to shine 
to let me glow
in Your luxurious eyes.

and I've kept a part
buried within my loneliness,
and swallowed the pride.
from high the pain 
spoke to me,
of aiming again
that rising Sun.

Tell me,
why I'm jealous of
Your memories,
of the past,
and all those tiny drops
that have caresses
Your face
gently,
those emotions that have,
lured Your inner 
and made You
You,
those sensations that have,
struck and awaken You 
to be 
You.

Why I'm crying now
why my heart is… 
roughly aching now,
is it that I still love You
or that I'm reminded of,
the woman I will never be…



©  Gh ~*

20.Oct.2017.


© 2018 Light



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Truly a poem and a half and a good un at that, quite beautiful and containing so many emotions...Hinting at joy and more than of regret....Super dooper say's I.....

Funny not everyone is familiar with jealousy and in that respect, I'm not sure whether I am one of the lucky one's or not.....If you ever get the chance and its still in print, grab yourself a copy of the Harrad Experiment by Robert Rimmer......All Good Things, N

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

6 Months Ago

Hi Nevile my friend, thank You again for visiting me with Your kindness, I always say there is good .. read more
Neville Pettitt

6 Months Ago

You owe me nothing....I am actually quite selfish & get a lot of satisfaction trying to help out whe.. read more
Light

6 Months Ago

Ha! "get a lot of satisfaction trying to help out where ever & when ever I feel able" it's as if You.. read more



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Beautiful imagery, very vivid and heartfelt throughout. Looking forward to reading more from you, Light.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

5 Months Ago

Thank You so much my friend for this kind visit and Your appreciation of my humble poem, I'm gratefu.. read more
The love of self or another that reaches and sits in the depths of the soul so deep- can be a blessing or a curse- the love for growth the love of encouraging and hoping overcome to show the way leaves memories written upon the sands of time and in nature the sounds and emotions are resonated into our bring- we cannot foresee the future so cannot be reminded of what we cannot be as what will be will be and come as it must - change cannot be stopped- out of a grateful truthful trusting heart many revelations will come forth- as the rain falls each drop cleandingbwashing away bringing a brighter new day- comfort being sent your way feel it in the breeze as you walk along may it soothe your hearts longings and calm the aches so deep- hope awaits do not lose it- your name is on the wind hear it calling don’t let anything stop you- love and blessings- gentleness for all things good🌹

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

5 Months Ago

And in abundance part to you may your cup overflow🌹
Light

5 Months Ago

~♥️~ I will visit Your page my dear, just when the time is right.
‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

5 Months Ago

No need for any returns of readings- it is my pleasure to read your words whether you read mine or n.. read more
You weave eloquence with melancholy like no one else. One falls in love with poetry when they read you, Ghounwah!

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

5 Months Ago

That's such a great compliment, thank You Kelly, my heart is so grateful.
Truly a poem and a half and a good un at that, quite beautiful and containing so many emotions...Hinting at joy and more than of regret....Super dooper say's I.....

Funny not everyone is familiar with jealousy and in that respect, I'm not sure whether I am one of the lucky one's or not.....If you ever get the chance and its still in print, grab yourself a copy of the Harrad Experiment by Robert Rimmer......All Good Things, N

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

6 Months Ago

Hi Nevile my friend, thank You again for visiting me with Your kindness, I always say there is good .. read more
Neville Pettitt

6 Months Ago

You owe me nothing....I am actually quite selfish & get a lot of satisfaction trying to help out whe.. read more
Light

6 Months Ago

Ha! "get a lot of satisfaction trying to help out where ever & when ever I feel able" it's as if You.. read more
Touch of love releases verses. Awesome job dear. Beautiful!!!

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

7 Months Ago

Thank You, very much my friend for Your most kind read and sweet word, I'm really grateful.
Beautiful poem,words fly of your inner emotions to very well express them deep into your love.
Expressing heartache that mingles within love.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

7 Months Ago

Thank You my friend for Your kind visit and thoughtful words, much appreciated.
Love evoking and memory invoking. Beautiful and sincere are your words that touch and spill to deep gorges.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

10 Months Ago

Thank You so much my friend for the kind reading and nice words, I'm warmly grateful.
Sami Khalil

10 Months Ago

You are welcome gracefully.
often we don't say the words until it is too late...and we don't write the words before the emotions are gone---poets always seem to bare emotions and yet at the same time hold back---we share but never want to give away too much...
but maybe we shouldn't hold back so much...we regret it later.
j.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

10 Months Ago

Thank You my friend for Your wise words, for me when it comes to my love, it's all bare, nothing to .. read more
Such beautiful imagery really coming to life, vivid and genuine. I particularly like the first and last stanzas. but the last few lines really capture something for me. I suddenly found myself becoming unexpectedly emotional on the second reading of this. Beautiful.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

10 Months Ago

Thank You so much my friend for such a really heartfelt and sincere review, I woudn't ask for more t.. read more

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Added on October 21, 2017
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Tags: Sad, Heartache, Pain, Emotional, Loneliness

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