Love in Mono

Love in Mono

A Poem by Light




Tell me
why I'm jealous 
of papers and pen
the fading drops of rain 
joyously enjoying
a moment of warmth 
over the lustful leafs 
before they fall
drenching my ground 
with sad rhythms
of my pulsing heart 
being crushed away
by the cruel winds

Of words that make 
a half of me
I've written You the years
filled Your palms with 
promised eternity 
and brought the Sun
down to Your feet 
to rise, to shine 
to let me glow
in Your luxurious eyes

and I've kept a part
buried within my loneliness
and swallowed the pride 
from high the pain 
spoke to me 
of aiming again
that rising Sun

Tell me
why I'm jealous of
Your memories 
of the past 
and all those tiny drops
that have caressed  
Your face
gently
those emotions that have 
lured Your inner 
and made You
You
those sensations that have 
struck and awaken You 
to be 
You

Why I'm crying now 
why my heart is… 
roughly aching now 
is it that I still love You
or that I'm reminded of 
the woman I will never be…

© Gh~*
20.Oct.2017

© 2017 Light



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Truly a poem and a half and a good un at that, quite beautiful and containing so many emotions...Hinting at joy and more than of regret....Super dooper say's I.....

Funny not everyone is familiar with jealousy and in that respect, I'm not sure whether I am one of the lucky one's or not.....If you ever get the chance and its still in print, grab yourself a copy of the Harrad Experiment by Robert Rimmer......All Good Things, N

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Light

1 Month Ago

Hi Nevile my friend, thank You again for visiting me with Your kindness, I always say there is good .. read more
Neville Pettitt

1 Month Ago

You owe me nothing....I am actually quite selfish & get a lot of satisfaction trying to help out whe.. read more
Light

1 Month Ago

Ha! "get a lot of satisfaction trying to help out where ever & when ever I feel able" it's as if You.. read more



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Beautiful imagery, very vivid and heartfelt throughout. Looking forward to reading more from you, Light.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

2 Weeks Ago

Thank You so much my friend for this kind visit and Your appreciation of my humble poem, I'm gratefu.. read more
The love of self or another that reaches and sits in the depths of the soul so deep- can be a blessing or a curse- the love for growth the love of encouraging and hoping overcome to show the way leaves memories written upon the sands of time and in nature the sounds and emotions are resonated into our bring- we cannot foresee the future so cannot be reminded of what we cannot be as what will be will be and come as it must - change cannot be stopped- out of a grateful truthful trusting heart many revelations will come forth- as the rain falls each drop cleandingbwashing away bringing a brighter new day- comfort being sent your way feel it in the breeze as you walk along may it soothe your hearts longings and calm the aches so deep- hope awaits do not lose it- your name is on the wind hear it calling don’t let anything stop you- love and blessings- gentleness for all things good🌹

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Thoughts In Time

3 Weeks Ago

And in abundance part to you may your cup overflow🌹
Light

3 Weeks Ago

~♥️~ I will visit Your page my dear, just when the time is right.
Thoughts In Time

3 Weeks Ago

No need for any returns of readings- it is my pleasure to read your words whether you read mine or n.. read more
You weave eloquence with melancholy like no one else. One falls in love with poetry when they read you, Ghounwah!

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

3 Weeks Ago

That's such a great compliment, thank You Kelly, my heart is so grateful.
Truly a poem and a half and a good un at that, quite beautiful and containing so many emotions...Hinting at joy and more than of regret....Super dooper say's I.....

Funny not everyone is familiar with jealousy and in that respect, I'm not sure whether I am one of the lucky one's or not.....If you ever get the chance and its still in print, grab yourself a copy of the Harrad Experiment by Robert Rimmer......All Good Things, N

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

1 Month Ago

Hi Nevile my friend, thank You again for visiting me with Your kindness, I always say there is good .. read more
Neville Pettitt

1 Month Ago

You owe me nothing....I am actually quite selfish & get a lot of satisfaction trying to help out whe.. read more
Light

1 Month Ago

Ha! "get a lot of satisfaction trying to help out where ever & when ever I feel able" it's as if You.. read more
Touch of love releases verses. Awesome job dear. Beautiful!!!

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

2 Months Ago

Thank You, very much my friend for Your most kind read and sweet word, I'm really grateful.
Beautiful poem,words fly of your inner emotions to very well express them deep into your love.
Expressing heartache that mingles within love.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

3 Months Ago

Thank You my friend for Your kind visit and thoughtful words, much appreciated.
Love evoking and memory invoking. Beautiful and sincere are your words that touch and spill to deep gorges.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

5 Months Ago

Thank You so much my friend for the kind reading and nice words, I'm warmly grateful.
Sami Khalil

5 Months Ago

You are welcome gracefully.
often we don't say the words until it is too late...and we don't write the words before the emotions are gone---poets always seem to bare emotions and yet at the same time hold back---we share but never want to give away too much...
but maybe we shouldn't hold back so much...we regret it later.
j.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

5 Months Ago

Thank You my friend for Your wise words, for me when it comes to my love, it's all bare, nothing to .. read more
Such beautiful imagery really coming to life, vivid and genuine. I particularly like the first and last stanzas. but the last few lines really capture something for me. I suddenly found myself becoming unexpectedly emotional on the second reading of this. Beautiful.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

5 Months Ago

Thank You so much my friend for such a really heartfelt and sincere review, I woudn't ask for more t.. read more

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Tags: Sad, Heartache, Pain, Emotional, Loneliness

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