Love in Mono

Love in Mono

A Poem by Light




Tell me
why I'm jealous 
of papers and pen
the fading drops of rain 
joyously enjoying
a moment of warmth 
over the lustful leafs 
before they fall
drenching my ground 
with sad rhythms
of my pulsing heart 
being crushed away
by the cruel winds

Of words that make 
a half of me
I've written You the years
filled Your palms with 
promised eternity 
and brought the Sun
down to Your feet 
to rise, to shine 
to let me glow
in Your luxurious eyes

and I've kept a part
buried within my loneliness
and swallowed the pride 
from high the pain 
spoke to me 
of aiming again
that rising Sun

Tell me
why I'm jealous of
Your memories 
of the past 
and all those tiny drops
that have caressed  
Your face
gently
those emotions that have 
lured Your inner 
and made You
You
those sensations that have 
struck and awaken You 
to be 
You

Why I'm crying now 
why my heart is… 
roughly aching now 
is it that I still love You
or that I'm reminded of 
the woman I will never be…

© Gh~*
20.Oct.2017

© 2017 Light



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often we don't say the words until it is too late...and we don't write the words before the emotions are gone---poets always seem to bare emotions and yet at the same time hold back---we share but never want to give away too much...
but maybe we shouldn't hold back so much...we regret it later.
j.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

1 Month Ago

Thank You my friend for Your wise words, for me when it comes to my love, it's all bare, nothing to .. read more



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Tell me
why I'm jealous
of papers and pen
the fading drops of rain
joyously enjoying
a moment of warmth
over the lustful leafs
before they fall
drenching my ground

Very heartfelt poem... something about it calls out to me too :) thanks for sharing it with all of us..

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

2 Months Ago

many thanks dear Galadriel for Your time reading and kind review, I'm happy to see You can relate :)
Sometimes in life there are just no answers to the inquiry of why certain things are the way they are. We must then take responsibility in what must be done - to continue on as things are or to let go and move forward. Your words are heartfelt and relatable to many. Keep writing Light.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

2 Months Ago

Thank You dear Angel for stopping by my page and leave me this kind thoughtful review, much apprecia.. read more
I love that smooth form. Like a river or drops of the rain. Words cover each layer of human sad emotions . I can feel clarity and meditation own mind. I don't know what can be improve for my eyes and ears is just beautiful.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

2 Months Ago

Thank You so much dear Writer, I'm pleased about You finding this with clarity and meditation, somet.. read more
1975 MCMlXXV

2 Months Ago

Yes and you too. We all should keep writing. That's our way to healing and make better us and this w.. read more
There is a sadness, a silence that lingers in every relationship, however close. There are places one cannot have access to and spaces one cannot touch, which perhaps someone else can...

Tell me
why I'm jealous of
Your memories
of the past
and all those tiny drops
that have caressed
Your face
gently

Beautifully written, deep and compelling thoughts. And a picture so lovely, enhancing the reading experience.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Light

3 Months Ago

You've felt it dearest Divya, and spoke with my voice, to receive Your most heartfelt words warms my.. read more
DIVYA

3 Months Ago

Its such a joy to do so. You are so welcome, dear Light.

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Added on October 21, 2017
Last Updated on October 21, 2017
Tags: Sad, Heartache, Pain, Emotional, Loneliness

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~..... and know that Love isn't in the beauty of my words but Love is in the thumps taking the lead of my heart, unto Yours that I'm not the dream but the reality dwells in the miracle .. more..

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