Love's Throe

Love's Throe

A Poem by Light


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When Gods, they spoke

The incantation of Love

and Fate fell

to command

the skies and earths

and everything in-between

"from Thy breath~

give Her birth!"

from heaven's aura

munching me

ethereal forms I seize

supple each time

to life's thump

blowing me up~through

like a dust from

ancient Goddess's spell

 

Thrums of water

~divine

drifting forth

from the rose's bud

woven along Your

breathing heart

my presence becomes

warm waterfalls

perfumes of Nature's pulses

the blossom of Your senses

melding me yet again

a sensation, afresh~

and I'm travailing

vibrantly,

upon

Your wanting palms

~

Take me

with the heartbeat of

Your quivering kiss

rising to,

Love's primal bliss

surge me through

Your genuine throb

lush, unto Your lips

I will continue to

live

 

You've created me

Your Lifelines

and I live to write

Heavenlines.


 

© Gh~*

29.Oct.2017

6.Nov.2017

 

 

                                 

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© 2017 Light



Author's Note

Light
I've been working and editing this poem for almost a week, I don't like how it's still a bit long, I will take any suggestion here, hoping it is good in anyway.

Thank You*

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I looks, reads, and feels absolutely perfect to me, GH*
I would not change a thing … it is sooo beautifully embracing to the senses.

I love it* … the presentation is stunning, and that blue butterfly is heavenly! ⁓ Richard ✨

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

1 Week Ago

Thank You my Syr for Your beautiful review and sweet encouragements and praises, working a long time.. read more



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this is so beautifully breath taking, your words the way you have presented it ... lovely...

how did you do borders? word ?i would like to give this a try


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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

6 Days Ago

Hi my friend, Thank You so much for Your very warming review, I'm pleased You've enjoyed my poem :)<.. read more
Light

6 Days Ago

The site didn't allow me to use the code for font, let me try with a message.
A poem that feels just divine to read. Beautiful in thought, feeling and imagery. Such is poetry that takes me to bliss.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

1 Week Ago

Awa! You truly warm my heart with Your loving one, Thank You with my deep gratitude*
DIVYA

6 Days Ago

Light is always welcome! 🕯
Light

6 Days Ago

DIVYA is always awesome! ~:)~
I looks, reads, and feels absolutely perfect to me, GH*
I would not change a thing … it is sooo beautifully embracing to the senses.

I love it* … the presentation is stunning, and that blue butterfly is heavenly! ⁓ Richard ✨

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

1 Week Ago

Thank You my Syr for Your beautiful review and sweet encouragements and praises, working a long time.. read more
Yes. re incarnated by new breath, breathed within the promise of continued love, support and encouragement without reprisals. We continue to follow that star that leads to a brighter, happier tomorrow....and are content.

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Light

1 Week Ago

Thank You dear Kitty for the thoughtful beautiful expression of my words, a rebirth with joy and bli.. read more
kitty

1 Week Ago

Wishing the best of all that is free as you go through the coming days.
A mighty spiritual poem with all the goodness and graciousness of the soul. You shine light through and through .

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Light

1 Week Ago

Many thanks my friend for Your lovely words, I wasn't so pleased when I ended this, but I said "I'm .. read more
Sami Khalil

1 Week Ago

You are welcome.
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Gee
Jesus, a week. I write in the hour or so before work, generally posting then editing when " live". Guess that's why there is a gulf in class between your " proper" poetry and my simple offerings.
Beautiful words put together with care and much, much thought.


Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

1 Week Ago

Awa! don't worry that much my friend, I too sometimes take a little time to write not a "bunch" of t.. read more
Gee

1 Week Ago

My pleasure
Beautifully presented like a bouquet of delicate, exotic flowers...lilting, lyrical language, form, flow, cadence- “Heavenlines”- absolutely! Each verse able to stand alone, but when together tell a passionate and adoring story. I think it’s lovely as is.

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Light

1 Week Ago

Thank You so much dear Annette for Your encouraging review, when I spend this much of a time writing.. read more
Annette Pisano Higley

1 Week Ago

You are so welcome Light! I know what you mean, I over-edit constantly. I annoy myself doing it- ha!
Light

1 Week Ago

So good to hear You can relate! but of course I wish You could relate about a more happier subject l.. read more

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Added on October 30, 2017
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Tags: Love, Spiritual, Personal

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