Tiny Treasures

Tiny Treasures

A Poem by Light


Tiny Treasures 

Give me a moment in time 
inside the innocence's spell 
under the blanket of fantasy
Where fingerprints were fireflies
dancing over the big windows 
and bare foot roaming free
with mud and loud laughters 
a whole world is made from 
tiny fabricated treasures 
ships from papers 
a mermaid and her prince 
living in a castle 
inside little girl's head
full of dreams
full of fervor
cartoon themes take me 
in the wondrous adventures
where hopes meet the stars
and dreams turn into a 
believed world.

© Gh~*
1.Nov.2017


© 2017 Light



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Golly dear sweet Light your poems get better and better every time I read one and this one sure makes my heart yearn and a tears fall soft cause I always wanted children but my hubby did not make it back from Afghanistan and some times I wonder if I'll ever fall in love again but this is not about me it is about the wonders and beauty of children and how they play and dream of adventures and I wish I had that prince right now i always dreamed of when I was just a little girl, I love it so much how you so easily express your heart and heavenly nature in your words -- thank you with much love! :)

HUGGS!
Sammi

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Sammi

1 Week Ago

My heart to you Light you are just precious! 💗
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Light

1 Week Ago

Thank You sweetest dear, Starry Sammi 🌟



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Innocence takes us away from the traumas of living in a tainted and disturbed world. Your poem reminds us of this little butterfly. If we could only hold on to some of this the world would be a more liveable space.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kitty

3 Weeks Ago

He is a bit afraid like I was of venturing over new ground/territory especially when it comes to new.. read more
Light

3 Weeks Ago

I can understand his fear, specially I remember how he dislikes technology like his enemy, but at le.. read more
kitty

3 Weeks Ago

Haven't had the chance to contact him but will do.
Again beautiful form words are chosen wisely with loving heart. This is can make lot of people happy. Gentle and strong hearing something very depth and very light. Something like whisper in echos of our thoughts. Very nice.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

WRITER-----------POET

3 Weeks Ago

I think we are so kind to each other. Thank you for all your reviews and writing they mean so much t.. read more
Light

3 Weeks Ago

Always, You are warmly welcome*
WRITER-----------POET

3 Weeks Ago

Yes you too my friend.
The words and display of this poem are well done with positive vibes, but halfway down one line brought sadness into it - tiny fabricated treasures. A nice array of words, hopes and feelings are all here which I’m glad to see end on a positive note. Angel

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

3 Weeks Ago

Thank You my dear friend for the sweet presence of You upon my page, Your read and kind words are mu.. read more

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Added on November 1, 2017
Last Updated on November 3, 2017
Tags: Childhood, Personal, Cartoon, Memory

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