Abounding Love

Abounding Love

A Poem by Light




Lay behind the giant mountain
Rise from the solemn desire
from Your lips~unto my heart
ramble Your whispers through ether
Speak to me with silence
Tranquil of rapture

To form You~ Realm
frame You endless boundaries
Vibrantly You're alive, luring my words
in each gesture, You shake my earth
drifting my senses to Your presence
and Your scent like sandalwood
strange and wild
fulfilling the mystical bound
shades of my poems
behind Your brow

Lay over my bosom
hundred words, one soul
let me flame glory
as we throb heavens
arousing the skies
to shed the world with
My Poetic Love.


©  Gh ~*
28.Feb.2017



© 2017 Light



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Oh yes, Gh*
If there is any one thing (among the many) I can say with sincerity about your poetry, it is that when reading it one is swept up and away from the world, completely into your enthralling moments.
One would wonder at what or whom this muse of yours -- that inspires such incomparably deep and heavenly verse of romance, feeling, emotion, sheer spirituality, and sensually charged expression --must be like.
Then, a wish to meet a muse of our own half as brilliant as yours, to emblazon our ink as glowingly bright, as softly hued, and as powerfully tender voiced. 😊
This piece virtually dances and breathes upon the page.

Your heart must be made of pure wonderment!
There is nothing contained herein I do not love, from glorious presentation in beautiful flowers with fernlike leaves, gentle font and hue, to each embracing moment of every word, line, and verse … my warmest hug of thanks to Thee for this one, Gh✨ ⁓ Richard

*"Abounding Love" … indeed!

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Light

2 Weeks Ago

Beautiful review indeed! thank You for the time reading and the gift of Your lovely words and wonder.. read more
Richard

2 Weeks Ago

I most humbly bow⁓*



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I really enjoyed this poem, and I’m looking forward to reading more of your pieces. I'm kind of new on here and it would be an honor if you can review my 4 new recent poems. (The world is ours, Nostalgia, Paradise, and You)

Thank you and Keep up the Good work!

Posted 4 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

2 Days Ago

Hi my friend, and thank You for the kind visit You've gifted me, I'm glad that You enjoyed my poem, .. read more
What a beautiful, hypnotic litany of words!

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

2 Weeks Ago

Thank You my friend for the sweetness of Your presence upon my page, I'm grateful for Your kind visi.. read more
deeply felt wonderfully said ... so nice to have my mind turned to this big big love in the world today .. so much confusion, control and lying :( i appreciate your poem...the language is just the right hint of something classical and mystical .. yet romantic in a human sense as well ... flows effortlessly for me ..a natural cadence ..read it once and feel i have sensed it all ...thanks for sharing Light ;))))
E.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

2 Weeks Ago

It's my real pleasure that my poem gifted You something nice and peaceful in this hectic world, Your.. read more
Einstein Noodle

2 Weeks Ago

aw thank you ;)...................
Oh yes, Gh*
If there is any one thing (among the many) I can say with sincerity about your poetry, it is that when reading it one is swept up and away from the world, completely into your enthralling moments.
One would wonder at what or whom this muse of yours -- that inspires such incomparably deep and heavenly verse of romance, feeling, emotion, sheer spirituality, and sensually charged expression --must be like.
Then, a wish to meet a muse of our own half as brilliant as yours, to emblazon our ink as glowingly bright, as softly hued, and as powerfully tender voiced. 😊
This piece virtually dances and breathes upon the page.

Your heart must be made of pure wonderment!
There is nothing contained herein I do not love, from glorious presentation in beautiful flowers with fernlike leaves, gentle font and hue, to each embracing moment of every word, line, and verse … my warmest hug of thanks to Thee for this one, Gh✨ ⁓ Richard

*"Abounding Love" … indeed!

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Light

2 Weeks Ago

Beautiful review indeed! thank You for the time reading and the gift of Your lovely words and wonder.. read more
Richard

2 Weeks Ago

I most humbly bow⁓*
moody prose of love and passion, nice work

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

1 Month Ago

Thank You my friend for Your kind visit and sweet words, much appreciated*
I adored this poem, to its very core. Your words are beautiful, and utterly magical. The way your piece flows, and the way I imagine it, is something extraordinary. Fantastic job!

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Light

1 Month Ago

Awa! my sweetest friend, You are spoiling me with Your sweetness and understanding! but when someone.. read more
PandaPeaceful

1 Month Ago

I wish you the same! I hope all is well with you. Happy New Year!
This is so very pretty and lovely. enjoyed

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

1 Month Ago

Thank You so much my friend for taking the time to read another piece, my pleasure that You've enjoy.. read more
Just great. Loved it ! :)

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

2 Months Ago

Thank You! my pleasure :)
The flowers are a wonderful touch to the imaginary even more in this delicately tender display of love.
Beautiful from start to finish! :-)

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

2 Months Ago

a lovely person You are indeed, from the avatar to the gentle sweetness of Your words, thank You so .. read more
Silmara McGarry

2 Months Ago

You are too kind, thank you! :-) And you are most welcome, dear ;-)

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