Over Your Lips~

Over Your Lips~

A Poem by Light





Calmed, it's midnight

my restless heartbeats

loosen into whispers

smoothly, flowing in the air

softly then, I'm laid

over Your sleeping lips

 

To gift You

a little bit of my essence

my breath

warm and vibrant

wanting You alive

wanting You a bliss   

gentle as a dewdrop

my existence dances

over Your awaking lips 


~

I'm made

from words

and beyond them, deep

my truth is revealed


with a kiss

 slowly I'm becoming

Heaven.


©  Gh ~*

6.Dec.2017






© 2017 Light



Author's Note

Light
just a little something this evening.

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that was so beautiful ! I loved reading it, I loved picturing it, I could feel the emotion, I enjoyed the word choice and the way you played with the senses, particularly with hearing. Not to mention this is a topic I can hardly imagine any reader being indifferent to. I bet we all thought of our own special someone either from the present or from the past whose lips would trigger such desire in us lol
Great job !

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Light

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Hi my friend :)

Thank You so much for reading my poem with a heartfelt and real feeli.. read more



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The greatest compliment I can give is this is a piece that so easily could have been written by EmmaJ.
Beautiful

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Light

1 Month Ago

Thank You for Your compliment and kind read, much appreciated*
I had to hold my breath as I read this. I'm beyond words. Romantic...it settled upon my heart like a soft fog. So delicate.

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Light

1 Month Ago

So sincerely beautiful are Your words my friend, thank You so very much for this lovely gift from Yo.. read more
+she plays with matches+

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I had to put your poem in my library of favorites.
Light

1 Month Ago

me and my poem, humbly bowing*
yes, quite the sensual and romantic piece...interesting phrasing in spots makes this different enough...that it sings of its own identity...

j.

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Light

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Thank You my friend for Your sweet thoughts of my poem, all much appreciated, Your kind read and tim.. read more
A wonderful “little something” my friend. Your graceful words dance Lightly like the kiss of a golden butterfly and jewels flow from your pen. This poem is simply mesmerizing...

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Light

1 Month Ago

Hi my "new" Annette :)

Thank You for another lovely gift, like always Your words flo.. read more
What a beautifully written and sweet romantic piece. I love your word choice, "gentle as a dewdrop" and "I'm becoming Heaven" are perfectly written. The mood and tone of the piece is very light and airy, which compliments the overall word structure of the piece.

Love the piece! Can't wait to read more :)

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Light

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I just found that You only write stories, can You forgive me my friend because I can't read stories .. read more
Elizabeth Mars

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It's alright, I never expect others to review my work after I review theirs, in fact I just read the.. read more
Light

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Thank You for the understanding my friend, for me I try my best to pay back those who were kind enou.. read more
Gloriously romantic write. Lydi**

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Light

1 Month Ago

Thank YOU so much for Your read and very nice praise, so grateful :).
A wonderfully sweet and delightful big thing, I'd say, GH! : )
From the wonder of your embracing roses to the calming spirit of your romantically rousing words, one is swept-up into the tender warmth of your vividly expressed moments, as your heavenly words dance up off the page into our hearts.
Wondrously rendered, in a soft poetic voice, and the picture soothes ever-so gently.

MMmmm … I love it, Dear Poetess, so dearly … thank you! ⁓ Richard : )

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Light

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Thank You dear Syr for taking the time to read my humble poem with Your caring mind and tender heart.. read more
Richard

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…⁓˜✨⚡️✨˜⁓…
Light

1 Month Ago

...... :) (: ......
This is beautiful so lovely and interesting to read in just a few words I was drawn in

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Light

1 Month Ago

You are lovely to me my friend with Your sweet words, thank You so much for taking the time to read .. read more
I can read here kind of free verse. Piece have lot of freedom and also words keep together unity. You tell story in just few words and let me tell you it's really wonderful story.

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1975 MCMlXXV meaning of freedom and love

1 Month Ago

All right lovely afternoon here is it afternoon.
Light

1 Month Ago

then "lovely" for all the times :)
1975 MCMlXXV meaning of freedom and love

1 Month Ago

Yes enjoy rest of your day.

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