moonbeat

moonbeat

A Poem by Light






I inspire
the twilight behind
world horizon
to melt through the mist 
weep nectar
over the promised flowers

driven by 
the miracle of birth
from the genuine sky 
sipping few drops 
into the hearts 
of the greedy flowers 
the poplar sings 
to the sprinkling aromas
over the blooming petals

flowing from there
I feel You
with the purest emotion
the sensation of Your spirit
wrapping my muse
and with a passionate release
You fall over my sheet 
birthing loving words
each time I inspire You
from behind the haze
each time I create 
a moonbeat.

©  Gh ~*  
28.Dec.2016


© 2017 Light



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I'm terrible at critiquing, so i'll just say this: Great work. I enjoyed the imagery (a cat leaped over my keyboard just now, thought I'd toss that irrelevant piece of information in here), the peaceful and auspicious flow of words, and, of course, the title, Moonbeat. Very exotic and intriguing, I must say

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

1 Week Ago

to me, You are so very far from "terrible", but speaking sincerely from Your mind and heart, my deep.. read more



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I'm terrible at critiquing, so i'll just say this: Great work. I enjoyed the imagery (a cat leaped over my keyboard just now, thought I'd toss that irrelevant piece of information in here), the peaceful and auspicious flow of words, and, of course, the title, Moonbeat. Very exotic and intriguing, I must say

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

1 Week Ago

to me, You are so very far from "terrible", but speaking sincerely from Your mind and heart, my deep.. read more
beautiful poem!! you have great skill and heart,

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

4 Weeks Ago

That's very sweet from You to say, thank You so warmly much :)
I'm a newbie here, pleez also review, comment my first poem here, wud luv to know your thoughts, I'm navigating the site looking for poem pals. Merry Xmas.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

1 Month Ago

Don't worry my friend, I will :)
As a moonloover the title caught my attention, and u created a new term, 'moon beat" sounds super. The poem is so awesome, sentimental n ends on sweet love notes. Beautiful word choice. Kudos.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

1 Month Ago

Thank You my friend for Your kind visit and sweet words from a moon lover made it even better :)
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Such a beautiful poem. I reread each line absorbing the imagery in each. So well written, so calming to read. Please keep writing.

Posted 1 Month Ago


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Light

1 Month Ago

Oh! Thank You so warmly for Your heartfelt and beautiful review, I so appreciate the sincere feeling.. read more
Understanding love's great connection an mysterious influence on the heart and mind - and body too. A fab write Little Flower. Have a good day. Thanks for sharing!

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

1 Month Ago

Very true dear Kitty, and so very happy to read Your wonderful words and see Your sweetest presence .. read more
kitty

1 Month Ago

Same here. The festive season is taking its toll. It'll be over in a jiff, then its New Years Resolu.. read more
such beauty in this piece, feels magical and yet laced with love.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

1 Month Ago

Hi Mark my new friend :)

Thank You so much for Your kind visit today, Your sweet revi.. read more
Mark Cotterman

1 Month Ago

you are very welcome Light. I enjoy the purity of your poems, been quickly reading a few, just love.. read more
Light

1 Month Ago

Thank You, again*
Your vision is so far.reaching.. tis like a seed exploding into life.. and.. growing.. and...

Such is every moment of life, the journey, the colours and power, the gentleness countered by the might moments when..

I know that passion is there but for me, it is not the core of your words but more the glory of creation in all its guises.

'I feel You ~ with the purest emotion ~ the sensation of Your spirit ~ wrapping my muse.. '

Beautiful words, dear you.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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emmajoy

1 Month Ago

Being a friend and loving your writing makes my support all too easy.

Have to dash o.. read more
Light

1 Month Ago

You are a loving friend to all, thank You again*

Take good care of You*
Hugs*
this is such great allegory...human birth, poem birth---the birth of a day----the beauty of it all...the feeling of being one with all...a moonbeat, a heartbeat...a love beat.
j.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

1 Month Ago

and... You said it all!! Thank You with my deepest gratitude for a really great insightful review*
Hi, Gh! : )
My, oh-MY! What a gloriously written piece to sweep throughout one's being, with a taste of sensual bliss peeking our from your poetic expressions, blended with nature in the pleasures of heavenly metaphor … your imagery is such that it virtually dances upon the page in allure impossible to resist being charmed and captivated by its tender embrace.
When one thinks of a moonbeat, it entices thought and feeling nothing else does, and it is sooo sweet to the senses, and the picture … OMG, it's gorgeous and heavenly perfect!

Needless to say, I love this one in a truly special way … thank you ever-so warmly, dear lady-poet, for the (ohhh so) lovely moment shared! ⁓ Richard ; )

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

1 Month Ago

Lovely words indeed, within a turlly lovely rewarding review, thank You with the warmest gratitude f.. read more
Richard

1 Month Ago

How could I resist? ; )

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Added on December 12, 2017
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Tags: Spiritual, Writing, Creating, Personal, Inspirational, Fantasy

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~..... and know that Love isn't in the beauty of my words but Love is in the thumps taking the lead of my heart, unto Yours that I'm not the dream but the reality dwells in the miracle .. more..

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