Prosperity

Prosperity

A Poem by Light



 

 

 

my heart, the vintage rose

embraced by Your scent

a scent of ~prosperity

suggests that, my heart

will bloom soon, vast

limitless, a sky and a sea

blend into, one cosmos

 

in the night's quietude

when my mind loosens to

the ethereal elegance

of Your aurora

yields with my breaths

weaving a new air

a new reality

as Your eyelashes

blink,

suggest that, my heart,

never was mine

 

and I fall, a'dream~

within the warmth of

Your aura

 

there,

I hold You in my soul

a re-birthed essence

of more~


suggests that, tonight is

but a night of

forever.



©  Gh ~*

3.Jan.2018


 


© 2018 Light



Author's Note

Light
I know there isn't a word such (adream), but think of it as (asleep) :)

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This poem was warm and inviting to take in and savor, like mulled wine. When I read this, for me it felt like this was the moment of falling in love or realizing that you have, and the feeling sits warmly in your chest as you appreciate the one who invoked it within you. I really loved this poem. Thank you so much for writing it.

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Light

6 Days Ago

Beautiful and really heartfelt words, thank You so much my friend for gracing my page with Your swee.. read more



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Such a very beautiful write, I really enjoyed this. so lovely

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Light

4 Days Ago

Thank You dear friend for Your lovely review and kind visit, I'm so grateful.
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Aw so heartwarming and wonderful.

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Light

5 Days Ago

Thank You my friend for Your kind reading and sweet words, much appreciated.
“Tonight is but a night of forever”- only you can write so exquisitely dear Light! Your words, like red rose petals, perfume the air and entrance the soul. Like a drink from a mountain spring, reading this poem replenishes my heart. Thank you my friend and Happy New Year to you!

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Light

6 Days Ago

when something missing upon my page, it would be You dear Annette, You and Your ever beautiful expre.. read more
This poem was warm and inviting to take in and savor, like mulled wine. When I read this, for me it felt like this was the moment of falling in love or realizing that you have, and the feeling sits warmly in your chest as you appreciate the one who invoked it within you. I really loved this poem. Thank you so much for writing it.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

6 Days Ago

Beautiful and really heartfelt words, thank You so much my friend for gracing my page with Your swee.. read more
There I hold you in my soul- How beautiful and intense to hold the one you love in your soul. Your words melt beautifully together as they paint a picture of love. Thank you for sharing this poem.

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Light

2 Weeks Ago

Thank You! for Your so sweet words and lovely gift on my poem, I'm warmly grateful my friend for You.. read more
The visuals are pleasing and the feeling of peace and love are illustrated throughout.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

2 Weeks Ago

Thank You my friend for Your wonderful expression of my poem, it's so sweet the way You've said it.<.. read more
Poetic Beauty

2 Weeks Ago

You are welcome
The rose is beautiful introduction to your poem. It tickles the senses and draws in the reader. Your words (I love "a'dream") and lines flow delicately and smoothly from beginning to end. And, I especially like the end, one of the unending nights together. Nice work!

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

2 Weeks Ago

Hi my friend :)

Thank You so much for visiting my page, it makes me happy that You've.. read more
i think "adream" is perfect, and it fits so well in its line...after all there is poetic license...
i made up a word in my first English 101 essay "Frizzly"
the combo of Frilly and Frizzy---my teacher pointed it out in a positive way...she loved it.
the aura of those we loved is captured in our dreams..and even if the person is not forever, the dreams can be.
j.

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Light

2 Weeks Ago

Frizzly, that sounds so nice :) sometimes my mind just comes up with words so I also leave them to b.. read more
aw such a wonderful beautiful write

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Light

2 Weeks Ago

Thank You so much my friend for taking the time to read my poem and enjoying it, I'm so grateful for.. read more
Prosperity in spiritual meaning. Symbolic pictures can open reader to mind to read this poem like own reflections. Style is elegant and keeping good flow. I can feel little influence of ancient poetry and sonnets. Meaning of poem for me is meeting with love what last more then human mind can imagine there is some transcendent magic in your words. I just wonder what you gonna write next. Nicely done.

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1975 MCMlXXV

2 Weeks Ago

When I make comment on some writing . I always try to response how is writing down, what I think abo.. read more
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Light

2 Weeks Ago

OK I will :)

Thank You again, and You too have a very nice day🌼🌼🌼

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Added on January 3, 2018
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