Heartprints (Visions of You)

Heartprints (Visions of You)

A Poem by Light
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everywhere...

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fingertips
the dewdrops 
Your lips, they amble 
over the dents of my soul
they utter,
and my spirit cries
she cries,
for once, she is wrapped 
in His spiritual warmth.

How come
              You incarnate              
the gentleness of flowers
the generosity of rain,
gracefully, it touches
the virgin earth,
where new life is yet 
yearns the kiss from,
this ample mouth.

buds, my heartbeats
and with each breath
my mind loves You
prints You, Visions
anywhere.

mindprints of
rapturous sensations
where passions pound
like shimmering spring,
where beauty glorifies
Your ethereal sheen,
where ecstasy finds
a new feeling, each time 
a heartprint finds its way
blooming
into the world. 



© Gh~*
17.Feb.2018



© 2018 Light



Author's Note

Light
just something.

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Good morning, Gh*
How wonderful to wake to the sound of your soft and gently affectionate poetic voice and that gorgeous, deeply moving picture.
I must have read this enchantingly captivating Free Verse composition a dozen times, each time wondering what on earth could I say that would even come close to matching the sweeping touches such powerful tenderness and beauty resounding throughout each word, line, and verse exude into my senses.

Let me simply offer my deepest, most grateful expression of thanks for the sheer pleasure of reading You … may you ever be warmly blessed✨ ⁓ Richard

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

6 Months Ago

There is a song that says, "do I have to say the words?", and I tell You, You don't have to say any .. read more
Light

6 Months Ago

Oh, I forgot!

Good morning, Mr.R J* :)



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I read this in two ways, a love poem and a spiritual poem. Delightful work which ever way your intended it my friend :)

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

5 Months Ago

I intended the two ways :) so it makes me pleased to know You felt them the two**

my .. read more
Stella Armour

5 Months Ago

my pleasure :)
truly beautiful
Really enjoyed

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Light

5 Months Ago

Thank You my friend for Your kind visit, I'm happy that You've enjoyed my poem :)
Dinesh Unlimited

5 Months Ago

mention not
Hauntingly beautiful my friend. It is a pleasure to read your work

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Light

5 Months Ago

Thank You so much my friend for the sweetest praise, it's my true pleasure that You've enjoyed my po.. read more
Glen's not so clean slate

5 Months Ago

Thanking ye! After coming out of a long-term abusive relationship, I have decided to join the body a.. read more
Light

5 Months Ago

Yes, You MUST love Yourself my friend, in the same way You want Yourself to be loved.

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This poem was quite soothing to read, I have to say. I adore the images you created here, and your use of vocab to spice up your writing. Also, love the title; I think it's probably the best your could have come up with for a piece on this topic. The only thing is (and this is most likely just an issue with me as opposed to an issue with the piece, so this is not at all criticism or anything like that) I tend to get a bit lost briefly whenever poems are set up the way you set it up, as I can never really get used to enjambment, or thoughts being completed mid-line for some reason XD. Anyway, wonderfully written, my friend. This "just something" is quite something! :)

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Light

5 Months Ago

criticism or not, I WANT my reader to be honest with me, with their thoughts and feelings through ou.. read more
I like the way you smooth those words with meaning, amzing.
Keep up the good work

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

6 Months Ago

So much thanking You my friend, I'm so happy You've enjoyed my poem today, thank You*
This is brilliantly written! Your word choices lend so much lyrical soundplay thru-out. And I love the title, along with "mindprints" for the way it suggests someone leaving his/her imprint on you, borne out fully in your message with a ton of softly-stated imagery (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

6 Months Ago

Thank You so much dear Margie for Your wonderful words and lovely review, You always show thoughtful.. read more
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This poem flows softly and smoothly. I really like the image you chose for it as well, there's something quite pleasant and charming about it.

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Light

6 Months Ago

Thank You so much my friend for Your kind read and very sweet words, my pleasure that You've enjoyed.. read more
Your words fall as gently as the dewdrops in the photo. Impressive and a bit sensual too. I'm happy I read it. Worth 100.

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Light

6 Months Ago

Oh! Thank You so much my friend, I'm happily humbly accepting Your sweet praises to me!
The beauty of your words is only enhanced by the lovely image. Thank you for sharing this touching poem.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

6 Months Ago

Thank You dear Divya, for the sweet support You always show me, I'm very grateful for it, for Your t.. read more
DIVYA

6 Months Ago

It is such a pleasure always to visit your page and to be blessed by your poetry, dear Light.
Light

6 Months Ago

It's my pleasure, for You to grace me with Your presence :)

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~... and know that Love, isn't in the beauty of my words but Love is, in the thumps taking the lead of my heart, unto Yours that I'm not the dream but the reality dwells in the miracle o.. more..

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