Aimer

Aimer

A Poem by Light
"

inspiration... inspired...

"

 


 

Aimer~


                            

You inspire

neither words

nor poems

but my breath to hold

 then to loosen it 

before kneeling

to caress a rosebud


You inspire

no tunes

or melodies

but the slow motion of rain

to warm

before gesturing

to kiss a petal  

~

to love You

as Your lips stir the air

with musical sensation

woven not

from the heart's whispers  

but from the Basil

looming their scent

into subtle utterance

 

to love You

as I watch Your breath

moving into the breeze

drifting like Sunlit drops

over the silken cobwebs    

knitting threads

of ethereal revelation   

 

to love You

with no sound

abandoning myself

to You

until I am 

reflected in Your eyes

my heart to swell

   my heart to shatter  

with rapturous tears


to love You

until it hurts

when nothing is overwhelming

but to fall into misery

and then rise to obey

Your solemn presence.



  

  Gh ~* ©

4.April.2018








© 2018 Light



Author's Note

Light
P.S, the title "Aimer" is the French word which means (to Love).




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Featured Review

A word-bouquet of pink and rose...tendrils of rapt adoration wrap around...the expression of human love in evocative metaphors of nature and the divine. Yours is a love that sustains life and is lifeblood itself. We are blessed with the beauty in your written words my friend. Brava!

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

8 Months Ago

today I'm very blessed too, for the warmth and care You've bestowed upon me, I wouldn't expect from .. read more
Annette Pisano-Higley

8 Months Ago

Thank you luv, if only the world could share the way we do.....:))
Light

8 Months Ago

if only.... 💞



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This is so full of wonderful fragrances, textures and thought. The concept of love not in normal material terms but as compared to natures bounty instead is a wonderful concept to write about and makes this piece very original. The last three stanzas are hammer blows of love and commitment unrivaled. Loved this a lot.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

1 Month Ago

I'm afraid when You read me more You will get tired of my style as I tend to bond love and nature ev.. read more
Beautiful, creative and an original spin to a tell we all know so well...yet words sometimes fail to penetrate the subtle flavours and aromas of their uniqueness. You on the other hand, have hit a bullseye with this one. Superb.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

2 Months Ago

How wonderful to see You again dear Lorry! to give me some of Your time and read one of my favorites.. read more
Lorry

2 Months Ago

You're very welcome :)
Calm, delicate and sophisticated read ~ as always. Warming and gentle. Captures the imagination Gh

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

4 Months Ago

You are caring and loving dear Kitty, may You ever be blessed and happy ✨. yes, we all should pray.. read more
kitty

4 Months Ago

I watch with careful eyes at the disasters gone and in anticipation of whats to come!
Light

4 Months Ago

may only the good to come~ "a prayer"~
Capital gorgeous and capital captivating. Your poetry is grace upon grace, love upon love anda celebration upon another. Rapturous tears become rivers of healing within. Marvelous.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

4 Months Ago

so Your beautiful, thoughtfully meaningful reviews, they are graces upon my pages, the sweetest of g.. read more
Sami Khalil

4 Months Ago

Gracefully welcome...
This drips of romantic sentiment, and that sweet surrender that comes with it all. Lovely work!

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

4 Months Ago

so happy You've enjoyed my effort my friend, thank You so much for the gift of Your time and the lov.. read more
Wow this is Gorgeous and romantic, esp admire how u say abiut kissing petals and caress the rosebuds, you weave that into muse Beautifully.lucky is the guy for which u wrote poetess. Kudos.


Hi, so nice to read from you again. Pleez do write your thoughts/comment under my newest poem here, titled, "jumbo jets vs jackdaws ..". Such interaction is my way to say hi to poem pals.


Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

4 Months Ago

Thank You my friend for Your sweet words and appreciation of my poem, I'm glad You like it, will vis.. read more
This was such a bittersweet read... The imagery was brilliant and each word was packed with warmth. Reading your poetry is truly a surreal experience :)

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

5 Months Ago

:) Thank You my friend, for Your sweet words and very kind visit, I appreciate it so much, and so pl.. read more
This is beyond perfect. sublime and surreal and heavenly. All rolled into one epic poem.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

5 Months Ago

and Your review my dear wrapped my heart with the loveliest beauty, how come You said it all in only.. read more
You my friend, could be the last of the Romantics- this, is what life is all about, this is emotion to hold in keeping, to be bright eyed in it's frightening wonder. True love is a high-sea sailed in our little boats of hope- drown or float, it is a voyage of a life-time.
Wonderful write, my friend!

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

5 Months Ago

to give me sometime during Your grieving sad times is more than overwhelming, I'm deeply grateful my.. read more
Alistair (Ali)

5 Months Ago

Thank you for the wonderful verse- it restores and warms.

All good things to you, my .. read more
Light

5 Months Ago

You are mostly welcome.

do take care of You there ~
A very heart felt poem in pink. The format and repetition of You are very effective. The lady is deeply in love, and your references to nature make it sound quite magical. A wonderful read (but i am not quite sure I agree with the last two lines!)

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great Aunt Astri

6 Months Ago

Oh, thank you for giving me a capital Y. This leaves me with great respect for You too!
Light

6 Months Ago

Thank You for noticing that! I capitalize "You" always, and yes! I mean it with my respect toward Yo.. read more
Great Aunt Astri

6 Months Ago

You are welcome.

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Added on April 4, 2018
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Tags: inspiration, Love, Romance, Passion, Spiritual, Music

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