so much of me

so much of me

A Poem by Light
"

another rainy day...

"





There is so much of me,

in the sturdy clouds

drenched and full;

hiding their sorrows

through the untouchable rain.


and


There is so much of me

in the frail petals ;

groaning in quiet moves,

soaked and laden

with broken tears.


~.~

I have no end

I travel beyond the reach of Your eyes,

I have no depth

my voice echoes through the Ocean's cries.


If only You could

touch a cord;

of ancient Soul has stringed

through endless places and times,

laid so much of Her

inside You,

now dissolving in the coldness

of Your heart.




©  Gh~*

8.May.2018


   



 


© 2018 Light



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This is one of your best that I’ve read so far. I love this poem! It’s so artful & original & unexpected. I love the way you crafted the first line of the first two stanzas – this refrain is so compelling, it really makes the sorrow palpable, followed by your intensely painted imagery. Your word crafting is so graceful & it floats off one’s tongue, much like the message you’re conveying (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

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Light

1 Year Ago

You know sweet Margie, I was just about to un-publish this one, then Your review warmly graced my pa.. read more
barleygirl

1 Year Ago

Thank you, sweet friend! I am often taught something about my own writing whenever people share thei.. read more



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We identify ourselves as separate entities, but some still understand that we are no more separate than the universe from the atom. To be one with the universe is not a goal, but a truth that many do not understand although they too enjoy that standing. This is a very thought provoking piece Light. I loved it!!!

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

4 Months Ago

Dear Crowley, thank You for seeing through my words, I always try to write in that way "to be one wi.. read more
Very wonderfil poem. I liked the second line of the second paragraph! It was great.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

4 Months Ago

Hi my lovely friend, I'm so happy to see that You've enjoyed another poem of me today, Thank You so .. read more
I know you said this is another rainy day but it refreshes some kinda thirst in me. The way your words and lines drip down almost washing away the clouds that have formed at my brow..just magical!

Posted 5 Months Ago


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Light

5 Months Ago

so lovely and poetic Your review my dear, I believe that I understand Your thirst too, rain has its .. read more
Anyone who mounts such pathos and beauteousness in her words, deserves to be appreciated. If someone does not, do yourself a favour and junk them for they don't deserve you. You don't owe anyone your tears, you don't give them any more of your time.

If people can walk away from you, let them walk. If you want to follow your gut and break away from an undeserving friend, walk and don't shed a tear.

Your poem talks about the pain within beauty. But your poem can also be read as positive self-affirmation, where the narrator knows her worth and can thus move on.

Powerful without being chastising.

Best,
M.

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

7 Months Ago

what I love about Your review that I believe that if I was to review a very same poem as mine here I.. read more
θεά 

7 Months Ago

I am glad my thoughts resonate with yours.

Cheers!
M.
A poem sweet and sorrowful all together. The first two stanzas are laden with the beauty of creation and the sadness intrinsic to it. The concluding lines take me deep within me, where nature dwells herself, in all her compassion and glory. Thank you for such beauty and light always, my dear Light! 💕

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DIVYA

7 Months Ago

You are most welcome, my friend. I thank you for such loving words of appreciation. You’re a Light.. read more
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Light

7 Months Ago

even though we only connect only by words, but we still care about our dear friends deeply, You are .. read more
You have create a masterpiece. I could write a epic story from these words. So many lines stood out.. Thank you my dear friend for sharing the amazing poetry.

Coyote

Posted 8 Months Ago


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Light

8 Months Ago

I'm sure anything You may write will be more than just amazing my dear friend, Thank You so much for.. read more
Coyote Poetry

7 Months Ago

I am glad my friend and you are welcome my friend.
Sorrowful touching, deeply meaning poem. That aches at how much we give of ourselves towards others. And forget about ourselves at times.

Posted 8 Months Ago


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Dawn

8 Months Ago

I am okay Light. Ups and Downs. But getting their. hugs Dawn.
Light

8 Months Ago

lots of Love and many Hugs being sent Your way~
Dawn

8 Months Ago

Bless you sweetheart. 💐❤️
There is so much of me that speaks in these words of yours...

"now dissolving in the coldness
of Your heart."
I abs love this. How we give in still, knowing it would affect no one but us, and how we hide ourselves in places and expect others to notice just a little...
I found this to be a mesmerizing piece. Always lovely to read you, Light.





Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

8 Months Ago

I surely don't want You to be in these lines dear Yumna, and I hope only for true happiness to fill .. read more
Welcome Back my dear Light!! I hope that you are well. Missed you so very much. You have come back with a brilliant poem of ethereal beauty and grace. From title to image to words to music-it is perfection. There is so much of me in the frail petals;”-I believe this about you. You live and love and smile and cry in your elegant verses. You are your words. Magnificent imagery, balance, metaphor here. You transcend all here. You bleed, yes, but you ultimately soar. This is Master Class work my dear friend. Brava! Xo

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

8 Months Ago

my dearest Annette, no one has been more brilliantly and wonderfully to me than You were and still a.. read more
Annette Pisano-Higley

8 Months Ago

Dear LS, I blush and bow. I can only hope to aspire to your most generous praise. Again, Welcome Bac.. read more
How I wish Keats could read this! ...mesmerizing, beautiful and simply captivating! I love how you can just barely see the sheets of rain coming down, weighing upon the roses.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

8 Months Ago

since I got You here reading my words I believe that's more than satisfyingly enough :)

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Light

8 Months Ago

AGAIN, the read more doesn't work, I was saying,

always a pleasure to have You on my .. read more
Kelly Scheppers

8 Months Ago

You are such a pleasure to know, so sweet! Thank you, Ghounwah!

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