Poise (in-between rhythms)

Poise (in-between rhythms)

A Poem by Light

 




~*~

The waking of Your heart,

awaken mine, to feel  

the world

is soothed through Your eyes,

the yearning Sea

settles,

with depthless divinity.


~

How I love You,

is not written in poetry

expressed with words,

composed by emotions.

 

How I love You,

is not a feeling filling Your lungs,

a thought, crosses time after time.


~*~

How I love You,

is the rhythm between

life and death

the melody,

in-between the trembles   

of creatures vitality

finding their entities

inside my Soul.

the sensational harmony, 

of floating energies

creating endlessly,

loving delights. 

  

The Poise of a breath

knowing,

there is no ultimate truth

as there is no ultimate existence

knowing,

with or without You,

this shall be infinite

one moment mine~

as life and death are,

one infinite presence.

  
~***~

to give the waves of Love

Pluses,

to breathe in

the Bliss,

that You were

still are,

totally Loved.




©  Gh ~*

4.July.2018



 





 


© 2018 Light



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This offering is a profound look at the nature of love. It depicts human love at its highest as being a reflection of Divine Love, displaying many of Its elements. The speaker uses various spiritual concepts and terms to describe the feeling between herself and her beloved: "infinite"; "ultimate truth"; "depthless divinity" are some of the superlatives that appear, inferring that human beings are capable of a highly spiritual way of relating, despite the mundaneness and occasional ugliness of our earthly existence. Reading this is reminiscent of reading a psalm. Well done.

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Light

10 Months Ago

always a pleasure to read You John, to read Your thoughts and understanding, the beautiful essence o.. read more
John the Baptist

10 Months Ago

I did not recognize your new logo. There is another person on the site who uses the pen name Light,.. read more
Light

10 Months Ago

it's me yes, with my "Lighty" wings :) hope all is well with You John, will make sure to visit Your .. read more



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Ancient feel of words in the amazing poetry. The feel of when love was life. Life was love. I did like this poem. Thank you my friend for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

9 Months Ago

my warmest deep thanks dear friend, for another much appreciated review, You were so sweet to me tod.. read more
Coyote Poetry

8 Months Ago

Was my pleasure and you are welcome my friend.
I wish I could choose my favourite line in this but it is as a whole an attractive, beautiful piece of writing. True, our love for someone is most times beyond expressible, beyond feelings. Such a lovely write, esp love the ending here!

Posted 9 Months Ago


Light

9 Months Ago

Thank You so much dear Yumna for Your sweet appreciation of my poem, I'm so pleased to know that You.. read more
"the melody,

in-between the trembles

of creatures vitality

finding their entities

inside my Soul."

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

9 Months Ago

Thank You dear Sami for taking the time to read my poem again, I'm pleased :)
Sami Khalil

9 Months Ago

You are welcome, Light...
"How I love You,

is not written in poetry

expressed with words,

composed by emotions.



How I love You,

is not a feeling filling Your lungs,

a thought, crosses time after time."



Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lovely write, I enjoyed it very much

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

9 Months Ago

Thank You my friend for Your kind read and visit, I'm happy that You've enjoyed my poem here, much a.. read more
Oh beautiful soul- that transparent love that touches the deepest of spirits- cannot be touched and is omnipotent and omnipresent- only to be touched by few and held by another special heart - set apart amongst infinite possibilities- to live so dear and true- only by one like you- special heart🌹

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

10 Months Ago

Thank You again my sweet lovely giving Rose, the depths of You, Your wisdom and feelings are great, .. read more
‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

10 Months Ago

Specialness straight back at you one hundred thousand fold xx🌹
OMG dear Light! Missed you. You have outdone even yourself with this magnificent poem. Tha ethereal picture, title and rapturous words are joined as one, as are the lovers here. “The Poise of a breath knowing”- brilliant line among many brilliant lines. Beautiful language, musicality, repetition, simile, metaphor. Each emotive verse can stand freely in its perfection. Brava my friend!

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Light

10 Months Ago

Miss You too dear wonderful Annette, just busy at the moment but soon I will be able to read Your be.. read more
Annette Pisano-Higley

10 Months Ago

Lots of love sent back to you my friend!:))
Loving one to the end of the earth and back is what comes across in this piece Gh. Positive vibes are felt here too. Courage in one's convictions rings a very loud bell. Enjoyed this charming read. Thanks.

Posted 10 Months Ago


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Light

10 Months Ago

Hi dear Kitty :)

so pleased this late evening to see You here and enjoying my piece, .. read more
kitty

10 Months Ago

Creativity at its best. Have a good day!
Simply awesome... :)
It just made me think of the depth which we fall in love....and even death can't change it . . So beautifully captured in your sweet words..
I am always in another world when I read your words ....a sweet world which makes love feel like something which is palpable.... :)
Keep creating magic ...dearest one...
(Hugs)

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Light

10 Months Ago

my dear Ardra, I don't know why my mind created an image that You've read my poem before and even le.. read more
Ardra

10 Months Ago

thanks :) our brains are capable of too many things we don't know..
i wrote a poem just now.... read more
Light

10 Months Ago

I WILL read it SO soon!!!

You ARE a precious SOUL dear Ardra! I'm blessed with friend.. read more
Beyond heavenly beauty personified by grace and a open heart,mind and soul and wisdom

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

10 Months Ago

I didn't have a doubt that if You read my poem here, You would understand it with Your own beautiful.. read more

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