Our Soul

Our Soul

A Poem by Light

don’t miss me,

a part of me is still breathing

somewhere precious

only you know.

 

and would you release me,

through the blossoming trees

cherries or poplars,

it’s always April

when my spirit in throes

to die or to rebirth.

~

 

Through eternity

my lips are your lips

my soul has birthed ~Thou

His presence, His breath.

 

I don’t need to breathe

that I've found You

my little precious,

in the tides of destiny

Your Soul has emerged from mine.

 

would You release me

closer to You

closer to Heaven.

I have unfolded

 the essence of the universe

inside my heart.

 

 

©  Ghounwah

26.March.2019

© 2019 Light


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There are times - although rare, when a reader stops to shake head, calm the heart.. then.. sigh and gasp til... able to read again. You write so beautifully.. laying open your thoughts without apology or arrogance.. and, always, beautifully. Your gift is to express with the most peaceful and exquisite pen in equal manner. Thank you... for curing this and that, this morning. x

'I have unfolded - the essence of the universe - inside my heart.'

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2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Light

3 Weeks Ago

dearest emma, Thank You for these special and beautiful words Your heart has gifted mine, it's alway.. read more
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emmajoy

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you so much. :)



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And inside the heart is where the essence of all life and live and meaning lies- the soul ties- i just have to wonder y so many people harbour lies here- nit being honest to their true - you- oh beautiful words and my wish is that the truth if all will emerge and want to be reborn- its souls like ours that lay tattered and torn watching waiting for them to see deeper and know that its the heart that all truth does show- blessings and love in abundance dearest light❤️🌹❤️

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

3 Weeks Ago

Morning dearest Kelly, Thank You also with abundance for showing and shining here with Your sincere .. read more
This poem is more than a collection of lovely images Light. You are sharing the idea or belief that life goes on forever through rebirth. Not everyone will share this as a religious belief but there is some deep understanding that we are in some way at one with nature. In our present dire straits we all need to hang on to this.I
All the best.
Alan


Posted 4 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

3 Weeks Ago

true, wise and knowing what You say my friend, my warm thanks for visiting me with Your valuable tho.. read more
This amazing poem has taste of love and eternity and immortal human values. We are all one, and I love the title "our soul". Really the last strophe is so powerful :
I have unfolded
the essence of the universe
inside my heart.

what I can call Poetry :)

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

3 Weeks Ago

You are very kind and sweet to me my friend, Thank You so much for these wonderful words and the hea.. read more
An all embracing and sincere piece from the heart, little butterfly. Beautifully written , as always. Thank you for sharing your deep and meaningful words.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

3 Weeks Ago

Your kindness which I should be really thankful for, Thank You with my heart dear Kitty for being sw.. read more
kitty

3 Weeks Ago

ups and downs but am holding on and weathering the storms. Hope you are too!
Light

3 Weeks Ago

same as here dear Kitty!
I have read this many many many times and keep coming back to it and it is written in such a way that it is impossible to not take it personally. I am of the belief that this affect is one of which we writers truly aspire and i must tell you f**k if it didn't to this bunny! Good god you write passion like few others bunny is (cough, sigh) is heart struck again by your lovely pen flying high!

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

3 Weeks Ago

dear Mr. Bunny You are again such a gentle, emotional and sensitive being to read and feel, then lea.. read more
There are times - although rare, when a reader stops to shake head, calm the heart.. then.. sigh and gasp til... able to read again. You write so beautifully.. laying open your thoughts without apology or arrogance.. and, always, beautifully. Your gift is to express with the most peaceful and exquisite pen in equal manner. Thank you... for curing this and that, this morning. x

'I have unfolded - the essence of the universe - inside my heart.'

Posted 1 Month Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Light

3 Weeks Ago

dearest emma, Thank You for these special and beautiful words Your heart has gifted mine, it's alway.. read more
This comment has been deleted by the poster.
emmajoy

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you so much. :)
This poem is precious. I especially loved the lines "I don’t need to breathe/ that I've found You/". So sweet and so lovely. Your words flow beautifully and almost musically. It's as if one is swimming amongst clouds, the image of two destined souls ever so present.

A memorable piece!
Much love :)


Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

3 Weeks Ago

what wonderful words flowing with sweet kindness You've gifted me my friend, thank You with my grate.. read more
PandaPeaceful

3 Weeks Ago

It was a pleasure, thank you.
Your soul shines so brightly dear Light- just like the image you chose. Fragrant wreaths of flowers rightly surround your spiritual, glorious words in this poem. Your verses testify to a love that triumphs and soars beyond time, beyond death to an eternal April of rebirth. “I have unfolded..the essence of the universe..inside my heart.”- and you have and will always dear Poetess. This is one to truly cherish and save.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

3 Weeks Ago

dearest Annette, first please forgive me for taking long to respond to Your ever glorious, graceful,.. read more
such a romantic blend of human and nature's love for each other, wish there was more of that, and the wording is so imaginative...
you took me on quite the journey...the visuals almost hurt my eyes...but the eyes loved it.
j.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

3 Weeks Ago

sorry that the visuals almost hurt Your eyes,but I know as You know it's the beautiful hurt :)
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This makes me want to lie covered in white satin on the chase and dwell in lazy afternoons in the sun ...sharing some love. April is most precious to me for it is a month of my rebirth and reform always. My condition may also hinder me just a tad but not enough to be beguiled by your smooth poetry and the light breeze of your warm soul. Thank you!

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

3 Weeks Ago

So sorry my Queen friend for taking long to respond to Your most lovely and precious words, not to m.. read more

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