Broken Puzzles

Broken Puzzles

A Poem by RW Erskine




In a unforgiving
train of thought
I lay my head
to weep
upon my pillow
Which comforts me
on the horizons
of my mind
I put together
puzzles
of broken pieces
and never realize
How many of them
are missing.

copyright 2018 by RW Erskine

© 2018 RW Erskine


Author's Note

RW Erskine
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or
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The word horizons really comes to life.
Somber brilliance to your words.
Very good!

Posted 6 Years Ago


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RW Erskine

6 Years Ago

you got it
thank you Brixley
In deep thoughts. We do find sadness. I liked the thoughts and the honest tone of the words. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


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RW Erskine

6 Years Ago

tank you Coyote
Life does often seem like a series of unfinished puzzles.
Excellent piece of work, RW!

Posted 6 Years Ago


RW Erskine

6 Years Ago

thank you Jimmy
I like the content of the poem, life is really a puzzle we have to put together the pieces so as to make it complete

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

RW Erskine

6 Years Ago

thank you Sette
sette

6 Years Ago

you are welcome

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Added on March 14, 2018
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