I Love You

the picture that see is the sign for Ravenscraft Studios which I am part owner. The design is by Regina Jackson Stinnett part owner as well. https://ravenscraftstudios.weebly.com

 

I love you

as the warmth

of the sun

upon the ground

I love you like the dew

kisses the morning

I love you

like all the stars

in heaven

As they are carressed

by the moon

You are my energy

You are the fragrance

of beauty

You are as the flower

which brightens the day

You are the gentle touch

upon my soul

You are my companion

You are my friend.

        copyrighted 2008 by RW Erskine

Author's Note

contact me at: [email protected]
or
visit us at Ravenscraft Studios
https://ravenscraftstudios.weebly.com

Reviews

[Kelly Scheppers]

It's an all encompassing love, if it is reciprocated.

[RW Erskine]

yes, this is true

[Alexa Apothic Red]

This is simple and beautiful longing, a letter to a love. Nicely done!

[RW Erskine]

thank you Alexa

[Corset]

I have three words for this, gorgeous, gorgeous oh and gorgeous ...where oh where art thou Romeo?

[RW Erskine]

you just put a smile on my face,
thank you and thank you reading it Corset

[Corset]

:)>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

Beyond beautiful and I hope she loves you too🌹

[RW Erskine]

thank you my friend

[Govind singh]

As the warmth of the sun and the dew that kisses the morning....wow!!!wat a lovely lines...best wishes:)

[RW Erskine]

thank you Govind

[Chris]

"scrips for plays" - Scripts?

I liked the emotional "taste" of this one... but the wording feels/seems incomplete - least to me.

[RW Erskine]

expressing what love means to this person, searching, reaching for the right words to express them , but can not quite grasp them. So in the end he looks at her and simply says you are MY companion, you are MY friend. Grasping at something you think is hard, to find out that it is actually simple. Less words, more spoken.
"scrips for plays" - Scripts?....??

[Chris]

You gave a LINK, I could at least view it - so I did... Studios mirror their talent - don't they?read moreYou gave a LINK, I could at least view it - so I did... Studios mirror their talent - don't they?

I do understand the "drift" of your intent... but sometimes you need to have the clarity expressed for such intent to be realized. Your love is also well more than a mere "friend" after all - yes?

[RW Erskine]

depending on your perspective of the word friend. A freind should go deeper as you can talk to your friend about anything (as you should with a lover) but that's not generally the case

[RW Erskine]

"You gave a LINK, I could at least view it - so I did... Studios mirror their talent - don't they?"......meannig?

[Chris]

I went to see your "work" - and I really DID look - it wasn't just lip service the way many give. I don't blow smoke, and I do give my own opinion of what I see, hear, and view. I'm not mean-spirited but I am real. I don't expect others to be mirrors of any rules or styles, and I always ask they be themselves. I don't like everything I see at WC but I don't dislike it because it's not as I would do whatever the it was done...(tongue-twister that). Anyways, in life "details" matter... least to me, 'nuff said.

[RW Erskine]

details yes, as I do in my art work.
What did you think of the studio and its art work so far on Ravenscraft?

[Chris]

I liked the fonts... The planned set-up and divisions. You could use more visual cuing... including unique pics and/or graphical designs that would give your sections AND site a "signature" look. Perhaps specific "samples" of your own AND your partner(s) style and talents - even "interests". At least as a start - and grow from that.

[RW Erskine]

thank you chris. it is a work in progress

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing and beautiful poem for love. The words gentle and worthwhile. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry for the magic of love.
Coyote

[RW Erskine]

thank you Coyote

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem for love and you are welcome.