Rantings of the Mind

Craziness this banter

inside of my head

Cries of laughter and 

tears are shed

My mind is so crazy and fascinating too

If only I could show a little piece to you

Just a peek inside is all it would take

To see such scenarios my mind creates

Author's Note

Still working on it just wanted to have it available where ever I was. The formation is going to change and it is not even close to being done.

Reviews

[alifeacoustic]

I like and understand. The inner workings of the mind is essentially us at our barest and we can barely comprehend its exquisite and intricate enormity, and I am only talking of one thought, not the vastness of our core. Every single thing that is us is so amazing and complex in itself, that is very rare that we get the bigger picture of our own, but we still want to glimpse into others and see what it is that makes them them. This is superb. I am totally in tune with this, superb.
PS....unless I'm totally wrong and out of tune :)

[Rachael Lea]

I have no idea this is one of the poems I started writing while I was studying half asleep and don't remember what my mindset was on it. I barely remember writing it, I just know my mind was filled with so many thoughts its hard to tell where it is going. I am afraid tonight may not be the night for me to figure it out either.

[alifeacoustic]

writing while tired can sometimes have amazing consequences that astound you when you read it over again when you are fresher. I remember I wrote the a to z acrostic while not having slept for thirty hours and I still can't believe it came out making sense :)

[Rachael Lea]

When you become tire you become more creative its just getting the words right on the paper you know no extra words or missing words. At least that's how it works for me.

[alifeacoustic]

Indeed I do. :)

[Inject Positivity]

Okay! I understand that it is still work in progress....I think there is a saying "our mind works better when it is under pressure of tired"....when our mind is tired i have witnessed the mind works out or comes out with different thoughts which really amazing.....Im looking forward the final piece of it.....

[NeuroVersifier]

I like the idea of being aware of, and accepting, both the crazy and fascinating aspects of ourselves and wanting to share ourselves (both our crazy and fascinating parts) with someone else. We all desire to be known and accepted for who we really are, but what a rare experience this is in reality. Nice write. I already like it how it is, so I look forward to reading the final version.

[Chris]

It will be interesting to see later on just where you took this one.

[Rachael Lea]

Thank you I still have no idea where I am going to go with this one. appreciate the review

[Chris]

coffee while awaiting the sunrise leads one to "thought-full" pauses

[Rachael Lea]

It sure does. Or hot tea during a sunset, A nice walk in nature really there are a lot of tricks its just seeing which one is going to work this time. Thanks for the tip I couldn't live without my coffee