Prologue: Lone Wolf

Prologue: Lone Wolf

A Chapter by Rachel

           And in the dark of night she left us. Left us for what she said was our own good. She didn't want to slip up and fulfill Ebba's wishes. Jay's Wishes. She didn't want to kill us. Didn't want to kill the world.

           We argued with her for many years. Told her she wouldn't be able to, mentally couldn't go through with it. Told her that we didn't care, even if she did. Still she left.

           She took her leave in the deep of night, waiting for all to take to bed. She used the shadows, friends as they'd ever been to hide her willowy frame. To sneak through the gate of His castle and on into the star studded lonely night.



© 2008 Rachel


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at first this was confusing, in the end it came to life in a dramatic way that not only brought clarity to the vision but also brought the idea to another height in transposing effect, subtle in a most powerful way

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I like this piece it kind of confused me at the beginning but in the end I enjoyed it very much.

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Some of the sentence structure is weird but it does pull you in and make you gwant to read more

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Rachel
Rachel

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Well, I'm ever so slightly insane, to start with. In my opinion, insanity is a necessity for any artist, be they writer, singer, player, or doodle-bug. I love to write, though I often get stuck, and l.. more..

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