Run

I find myself when I'm running after you

Run

All the melodies in the world

Are in his eyes

His voice, soft, safe

Music of the sunrise

 

Calling from the secret

Waterfall song

Whispering music allure

Where I belong

 

Run after the music

Through the pain

Hands on broken heart

Taste the rain

 

Lost in music all around

Other voices grow so dim

Angels’ soft singing

Symphony of Him

 

 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful artwork and emotional journey in the words. You create places and thoughts for the reader. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[jacob erin-cilberto]

if you already write like this at sixteen...the poetry road for you is going to be an infinite highway...

such ease of phrasing, nice alliteration...the poem itself is as musical as its theme.

jacob

[Roshan Nair]

Music defies every logic known to man according to me. It alleviates, redeems and even punishes. I loved every bit of this piece as it beautifully evokes the power of music and that means a lot to me being a musician myself
Cheers! :) great work

[J. K. Beach]

Rachel... You have penned a lovely poem that reminds us that there's nothing like a new song (or a good old one) to drown out the cacophony of pain. This is well crafted... it has structure and your words and rhyme fit on it very well! "Symphony of Him" is such a short line but speaks volumes and has multiple meanings, I think. Altogether a beautiful piece.

[The StoryTeller]

This is really nice, and I really liked it. I go a few different meanings from this, but due to my last really long comment, which I figure you don't want again, I'll keep them to myself. I will say, however, that this is simple, yet says so much.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Quite beautiful this piece.
Felt like you where in a dream, and I was looking through your eyes, going on the journey with you.
Lots of emotions in this piece, was meaningful and deep.
I enjoyed it, great write :)

[Lizardo]

Sometimes we just want to run
And when we do that
We see how beautiful life is
Wonderful poem you have here!