Drifting

And if I cried out for help

would you even care?

If suddenly I were a part of the sky,

If suddenly I were no longer there.

Say the moon became my best friend,

And I fell in love with the stars,

would you even care?

If suddenly I drifted too far?

For the water on the earth would continue to flow,

and the grass would stay green.

If I were to suddenly disappear,

Life would continue to grow.

Reviews

[Tks]

I'm sorry to hear about your friend, my deepest and sincerest condolences to you. Her memory lives on in this gorgeous, heartfelt piece you have written. Yes, life does go on, everyone says that. But, she will live forever, tucked safely in your memories. Because she has made an impact on you. An impact on the world.

[Summer Rose]

Thank you, but this poem wasn't about her. I was thinking about a poem I had submitted someplace else. My apologies for the confusion haha this was something I wrote as to clear my mind. Thank you for your review!