Well C., at least you have a spectacular mind :D
Being a prize-f**k doesn't even seem all that great.
Alright, in all seriousness...
I really liked the piece.
Especially the part where you say that when you
think you've accepted something you get
all these "irrationals" lurking in your mind.
And the free-fall creativeness totally works for you :D
And this:
Once, I was
deluded enough
to believe
I could share something
that doesn't even
belong to me.
I REALLY liked, it left me thinking,
that's probably why :D
Totally immersing use of description to uncover a more visceral and in this case personal path to a concept that is so abstract yet so important to us all.
There is such a degree of vitality in here...someone who finally compromiseswith being who he is...yet there are back lashes,rewind pauses...wonderful...
Well C., at least you have a spectacular mind :D
Being a prize-f**k doesn't even seem all that great.
Alright, in all seriousness...
I really liked the piece.
Especially the part where you say that when you
think you've accepted something you get
all these "irrationals" lurking in your mind.
And the free-fall creativeness totally works for you :D
And this:
Once, I was
deluded enough
to believe
I could share something
that doesn't even
belong to me.
I REALLY liked, it left me thinking,
that's probably why :D
aw, dear. I was never the pretty girl. Never the girl that boys talked to for my sake. I was a go-between of sorts for girls they liked better. I was tall and awkward and plain. Still am. Add to that those extra stores of fat that come to gals of my age especially after having gone through pregnancy a few times . . . I'll never be that woman that we all aspire to be.
Hey there.
RAEF C. BOYLAN
Where Nothing is Sacred: Volume One
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