Desperate

Desperate

A Poem by Raghib

I stand alone,
Not knowing my surroundings.
Through misty sights,
I see so many of you standing .
I reach out for one,
But they catch nothing .
If only someone ,
Could understand my feelings.
Why am i trying ?
I shout at myself .
Look what i expect ,
Look what i get .
I am sick of playing,
This game of life and death .
I go to bed lifeless,
I wake up lifeless .
I have become Sisyphuss,
Pushing the rock just to see it falling .
These futile attempts ,
I am tired of trying .
I tell myself ,
These shadows are my only hope .
When life puts me down,
Love is my only cure .
So i will reach out again,
Desperate to be in someone's arms .

© 2017 Raghib



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I feel the same somtimes.
I go to bed life less,
I wake up life less.
Very touching emotions.

Posted 19 Hours Ago


the shadows of love that can save you..

Posted 1 Week Ago


Raghib

1 Week Ago

thank you for your visit wordman . how did you like it ?
 wordman

1 Week Ago

i liked it very much
Raghib

1 Week Ago

i am glad you did
These shadows are my only hope .
When life puts me down,
Love is my only cure .
So i will reach out again,
Desperate to be in someone's arms

Arrow to the heart right there.
well penned piece my friend,

Posted 1 Week Ago


Raghib

1 Week Ago

thanks man . glad you liked it . thanks for the visit
costa siwale

1 Week Ago

I did indeed, welcome.
No one said life was easy but you write with a darkness that appears to be serious. Love is certainly something to reach out for in such a circumstance. Persistence will pay-off eventually. Keep trying.

Posted 1 Week Ago


Relic

1 Week Ago

I don't think she means the rhymes. It's the excess words. A writer here once told me to cut out the.. read more
Raghib

1 Week Ago

i will try to work on that . thank you both
Sasheera Gounden

1 Week Ago

It's a pleasure. Yes that is what I meant Relic.

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