Again!

Again!

A Poem by Raghib

And in the city of love,
Did his blotted soul wander tonight .
His mind calling out for it,
But little did it have knowledge .
He craved for some remorse,
From walking alone and dead .
The caring seeds of affection,
Resurrecting his lost sides again.
But there was a trammel,
Those memories passed once again .
Not those that were painful,
Cuts too deep to be false .
But those that were too good,
To be true once upon a time .

© 2017 Raghib



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Cuts too deep to be false But those that were too good To be true once upon a time
Beautiful!

Posted 2 Months Ago


"And in the city of love,
Did his blotted soul wander tonight." Favorite line. Well done.

Posted 2 Months Ago


A sobering piece in which the protagonist recognises his demise and despite wishing for salvation feels too far gone already.

Posted 2 Months Ago


In the steps of the dead judgement must weigh heavy on ones soul as memories testify. I like this concept and it is going to haunt my thinking for days to come, thank you for that I love things that touch my mind :~) Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!

Posted 2 Months Ago


Raghib

2 Months Ago

Thank you for the review . Glad you liked the concept
You took me on a journey along with your words. Descriptive and painful write, I liked it.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

2 Months Ago

No, this is not bad. It gives a clear image that a soul in a city of love feels isolated and he is l.. read more
Raghib

2 Months Ago

Thank you for your assurance . I was thinking this was bad .
Najam Us Saher

2 Months Ago

It isn't. You are welcome :)
once upon a time,the memories that dwell in my mind

Posted 2 Months Ago


Raghib

2 Months Ago

i dont understand whether you like my poems or not ?
 wordman

2 Months Ago

of course i do

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