Again!

Again!

A Poem by Raghib

And in the city of love,
Did his blotted soul wander tonight .
His mind calling out for it,
But little did it have knowledge .
He craved for some remorse,
From walking alone and dead .
The caring seeds of affection,
Resurrecting his lost sides again.
But there was a trammel,
Those memories passed once again .
Not those that were painful,
Cuts too deep to be false .
But those that were too good,
To be true once upon a time .

© 2017 Raghib



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A sad story written in the poem. Memories can be sweet and memories can be sad. I liked the flow of thoughts leading to the powerful ending. Thank you Raghib for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 4 Months Ago


Cuts too deep to be false But those that were too good To be true once upon a time
Beautiful!

Posted 10 Months Ago


"And in the city of love,
Did his blotted soul wander tonight." Favorite line. Well done.

Posted 10 Months Ago


A sobering piece in which the protagonist recognises his demise and despite wishing for salvation feels too far gone already.

Posted 10 Months Ago


In the steps of the dead judgement must weigh heavy on ones soul as memories testify. I like this concept and it is going to haunt my thinking for days to come, thank you for that I love things that touch my mind :~) Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!

Posted 10 Months Ago


Raghib

10 Months Ago

Thank you for the review . Glad you liked the concept
You took me on a journey along with your words. Descriptive and painful write, I liked it.

Posted 10 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

10 Months Ago

No, this is not bad. It gives a clear image that a soul in a city of love feels isolated and he is l.. read more
Raghib

10 Months Ago

Thank you for your assurance . I was thinking this was bad .
Najam Us Saher

10 Months Ago

It isn't. You are welcome :)
once upon a time,the memories that dwell in my mind

Posted 10 Months Ago


Raghib

10 Months Ago

i dont understand whether you like my poems or not ?
 wordman

10 Months Ago

of course i do

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